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darkness.. sparked from the recesses of light
successes and plights has got me obsessed with the night
i press for a fight but find myself facing me
chasing the same thing over and over like a vagrant disease
save me from me dont let me dwell in the dark
i fell to the sharks with chest pains cause im not well in my heart
i fell from the start with a promise to finish
im somber with dimness living dirty being dishonest to limits
i promised to give it but its hard to maintain
i do the same thangs expecting to see my lanes change
my main pain is this vicious cycle im stuck in
getting sucked in to a pattern of highs inside a drug binge
im plugged in but it seems like i've tuned out
i'll soon drown falling into a puddle from some doomed clouds
i resume doubt as soon as i pick up confidence
dropping it cause of late i've forgot where my options been
i pop a colotopin to numb away this pain inside
i blame the tides for tearing my life driving me insane wit might
my viens are tight pressing my beat into flesh
i cheating to death smoking stress as i beat my chest
i see my death coming from my own means
never home free cause the misery fucking owns me

nice hit. one

yo i liked thiss from start to finish dope i rapped it out loud and my peoples lovved it as well keep doing ya thang big ups homie

Def this was nice man, liked the multis that ended and began the lines, dope drop bro

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this shit was dope i would give it 9/10

As soon as I read the first bar, I hoped the flow would stay like that the whole way through and it did. Flow was dope, as well as the multies. They didn't seem forced. I like the concept and the personal aspect of it. Honestly, this is the first drop I've read from you and I enjoyed it. Good shit man...

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thanks for the feed guys, still upping for some more, will be returned if link is left+

nice post, multis seemed legit throughout, not forced, flow was ight, couple lines i didnt really like, but the majoity i enjoyed, kool concept to rap about, you stay with it, didnt go off topic which is good, keep it up

This shit was dope as fuck, man. It was deep and it flowed like a mothafuckin river. You got a knack for snappin. Props on this bruh, everything else has pretty well been covered by everyone else. Lol they thought it was dope too.

Very heartfelt piece. Shit was amazing! Really diggin this.

These bars were crazzzy!!

my main pain is this vicious cycle im stuck in
getting sucked in to a pattern of highs inside a drug binge
im plugged in but it seems like i've tuned out
i'll soon drown falling into a puddle from some doomed clouds
i resume doubt as soon as i pick up confidence
dropping it cause of late i've forgot where my options been

SICK!!!

Thanks for the drop. Really enjoyed reading
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