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4 bars.. 24 hours from check...

-- Thu May 12, 2011 11:24 pm --

soooooo...check (ha)

check

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Challenge me? Might wanna join the Special Olympics of Battling for a better end story,
this kid wouldn't win a one-on-one if he was battlin “Corky”// (Corky from Life Goes On)

Spittin words with EcK, you'd have a better chance of survival in no where land with MacGyver,
I'm moldin you kid, cuz jus think the finest “steel” has to pass through the hottest fire//

Two bars down an still no escape son,
look at it this way, I'm sendin you back to reality, this emcee'n attempt was jus a vacation//

I'm sendin you flyin like Peter Pan cmon let's play pretend,
it's not the fall that kills you playa, its the sudden stop at the end//

-- Fri May 13, 2011 10:17 am --

damn my bad..saw that I didnt put (test battle) in the title..anyway that could be changed? Jus slipped

wat the hell?i posted my verse and now it aint here any more...wats hapening,sory for the free post now

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-- Mon May 16, 2011 11:48 pm --

ima post line by line cuz im limited to space.

-- Mon May 16, 2011 11:56 pm --

Your WATERED -DOWN rhymes SLAUGHTERED-NOW , "CANT " climb (up) FUNGI~AND~ MOSS.

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:02 am --

*cuz of FUNGI AND MOSS ,ment to type..

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:07 am --

Just "DAMP", your DORMANT-ROUNDS died ,jus "WACK", FLAWS-IS-BOUND to suicide, this dummy ~FELL~OFF// (im saying that hes not elevatin n his rhymes weak n when water standstill it becum moss.

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:07 am --

Just "DAMP", your DORMANT-ROUNDS died ,jus "WACK", FLAWS-IS-BOUND to suicide, this dummy ~FELL~OFF// (im saying that hes not elevatin n his rhymes weak n when water standstill it becum moss.

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:12 am --

This ECSTACY like COCAINE, DEFINITLY ,crack jokes when hes in rap mode, hes a BROKE SHAME(refering to the word crack meaning broken)

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:15 am --

Your DESTINY, BLOWN AWAY like a PENETENTIARY man hoe, rehab yo for this drug SOAKED GAY //

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:16 am --

ill rip ya soul outta your body,then cremate you

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:17 am --

Couldnt be hot if hell was your place dude//

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:22 am --

This MISFIT remains-dope, until the VICIOUS craves-show , boutta WITNESS pain-Hoe, side effects HITTING till your brain goes , slowly KILLING yaself heres the od(over dose)blow.

-- Tue May 17, 2011 12:24 am --

The end,the last post is one bar

eck:

Challenge me? Might wanna join the Special Olympics of Battling for a better end story,
this kid wouldn't win a one-on-one if he was battlin “Corky”// (Corky from Life Goes On)

i dont get it.

Spittin words with EcK, you'd have a better chance of survival in no where land with MacGyver,
I'm moldin you kid, cuz jus think the finest “steel” has to pass through the hottest fire//

eh. weak.

Two bars down an still no escape son,
look at it this way, I'm sendin you back to reality, this emcee'n attempt was jus a vacation//

eh. weak.

I'm sendin you flyin like Peter Pan cmon let's play pretend,
it's not the fall that kills you playa, its the sudden stop at the end//

wtf? no.





jsteel:
****i edited ur verse jsteel so it looks normal to read****

Your WATERED-DOWN rhymes SLAUGHTERED-NOW, "CANT" climb (up) cuz of FUNGI~AND~MOSS//
Just "DAMP", your DORMANT-ROUNDS died, jus "WACK", FLAWS-IS-BOUND to suicide, this dummy FELL~OFF// (im saying that hes not elevatin n his rhymes weak n when water standstill it becum moss//

this was bad^^^^^

This ECSTACY like COCAINE, DEFINITLY ,crack jokes when hes in rap mode, hes a BROKE SHAME//(refering to the word crack meaning broken)
Your DESTINY, BLOWN AWAY like a PENETENTIARY man hoe, rehab yo for this drug SOAKED GAY//

WTF?! LoL. NO!

ill rip ya soul outta your body,then cremate you//
Couldnt be hot if hell was your place dude//

absolutely not!

This MISFIT remains-dope, until the VICIOUS craves-show , boutta WITNESS pain-Hoe, side effects HITTING till your brain goes , slowly KILLING yaself heres the O.D.(over dose)blow.

No.




ECK won this battle easily.
Steel - stop writin from ur phone dude, that shit is too hard to understand and its weak as fuck.

vote: eck

EcKsTaSy:

Challenge me? Might wanna join the Special Olympics of Battling for a better end story,
this kid wouldn't win a one-on-one if he was battlin “Corky”// (Corky from Life Goes On)

Meh.

Spittin words with EcK, you'd have a better chance of survival in no where land with MacGyver,
I'm moldin you kid, cuz jus think the finest “steel” has to pass through the hottest fire//

Not really getting at him.

Two bars down an still no escape son,
look at it this way, I'm sendin you back to reality, this emcee'n attempt was jus a vacation//

Pretty weak and the difference in line length really threw off the flow.

I'm sendin you flyin like Peter Pan cmon let's play pretend,
it's not the fall that kills you playa, its the sudden stop at the end//

Let's play pretend? Not feeling it.





JSteel:

Your WATERED-DOWN rhymes SLAUGHTERED-NOW, "CANT" climb (up) cuz of FUNGI~AND~MOSS//
Just "DAMP", your DORMANT-ROUNDS died, jus "WACK", FLAWS-IS-BOUND to suicide, this dummy FELL~OFF//

Tried too hard with the wordplay and it got overly complicated.

This ECSTACY like COCAINE, DEFINITLY ,crack jokes when hes in rap mode, hes a BROKE SHAME//
Your DESTINY, BLOWN AWAY like a PENETENTIARY man hoe, rehab yo for this drug SOAKED GAY//

Weak.

ill rip ya soul outta your body,then cremate you//
Couldnt be hot if hell was your place dude//

Really weak!

This MISFIT remains-dope, until the VICIOUS craves-show , boutta WITNESS pain-Hoe, side effects HITTING till your brain goes , slowly KILLING yaself heres the O.D.(over dose)blow.

I'm not even sure what you're trying to say here.


Pretty weak from both sides but Ecks got it.

+1 EcKsTaSy

2-0...appreciate the votes

Its reaaaaly easy to pick a winner. J Steel, i really wish you would stop using your phone to battle. Its your worst enemy right now... Its nice to see you try to write line by line, but it's still not flowing correctly. The visual aid of a computer screen can help you set up your battle better man. I cant really say i liked any specific part of your drop.



X, you werent to great off either... there is no point in tearing into you because id be rpeating everything they've already told you. One thing i will comment on is shoot for more personals man, gut your opponent, general punches are cool and funny, but personals give that Oh factor.



MVGT X