Hip Hop Forum

This times mine, to right rhymes wit devine lines, i blind minds ina time line...
fashion, bashin, all actors rappin and trashin, the game im lashin, thrashin the masses...
the postition of my composition decomposes the competition like all my contridictions...
my pashion is everlastin, i sever wackness, wit clever track spit, my trax are never lackin...
facts to react wit, burnin brain cells like battery acids, i have mad tricks to paralyze the game like supermans back did, buts it must be magic the way i have you doin back flips...

first off, i see that you have been leaving feedback on others sutff, but next time you post a topic remember to drop a link with it.


but yeah, i mean not much to comment on. It was hot. The first line was my favoritre. Like i said, if you expand it I think It would be nice. 1st and 3rd bars are the best though.

decent multis, seemed like a bunch of one liners so it was short n to the point, seems like something i would've cyphered on my freetime, overall it was entertaining while it lasted

thanx yall.... what do you mean leave a link?

Just put a link to something you left feedback on. The rule at he top of this forum.

why do we need a link to that stuff

Because people post but dont leave feedback. It creates an uneven enviroment. Then most people only get feedback from me and killah persay. In this case. You get feedback from everyone who is dropping verses at least.

i think this should only apply to battles since battles r more important than writtens and most of the time ppl leave feedback on here n e ways

battles now seem to end pretty quickly. As writtens get less feedback then necessary.

the more feedback drops get, my theory is the more drops there will be

we will see what 8th has to say about it, its his idea anyway

Dope Shit, From This Ghost Kid,
He Wrote With,
The Blood From When Ya Got Ya throat Slit//

Lol..Good Shit Man, You Definately Elevate Ever Drop..Keep Em' Comin Homie.

thanx man

leaving feedback before you drop your own is the un-selfish thing to do. Thats how most other successful sites do things in order to make sure people leave feed. Its not to much to ask to leave feed on ONE other persons drop before you drop your own. Its donating 10 minutes for the good of the site and to help your fellow writers.

agreed

I Agree As Well @ 8th.
Not Only That, It's Respect. More like Respect Somebody's Flow, They Respect Yours.. Text Battling Or Just Textstyle'n For that Matter Is A Good Way To Elevate..Again Good Shit Bro.