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-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:56 pm --

your rhymes declined, why don't you read the signs/
like crippled drug dealers you can't deliver your lines/


from a KING to peasent, you believe your style is pleasent?/
you were in 25 battles and in 13 the competition wasn't present/


your disses deficient, i'm a lyrical delinquent/
not buying your style, not interested in cheap clearance equipment/


on a killing spree, if you run i decapitate your knee/
so like Qu Yuan i'll leave YOU SPLASHing in the sea/ (Splash- in)


take a step in my den, how are YOU dope with the pen?/
when "SPLASH" is dance a bar for homosexual MEN/ (true story)


i'll have you rethinking, and winning catagoury just shrinking/
put you in deep waters but MADISON couldn't save SPLASH from sinking/


MADISON- in the MOVIE "splash" Madison was a mermaid who saved Allen Bauer from drowning

QU YAN- a man who commited ritual suicide by drowning as a form of protest because of the coruption of his era

SPLASH - a dance bar for gay men. don't believe me? http://www.splashbar.com/ (i thought the person on the front page was SplashKing for a second)

when this battle became official SplashKing had been involved in 25 battles 13 of which he "won"

at the gay-club your the Bar-Maid,witness death leave you deeper than a sharp-blade
your verses are more playedout than an Arcade

wondering what mans next,you faggit im tighter than your 80's Spandex
you couldnt drop 6 dope bars if you had 17 boxes of Xanax

your fucked you troubled fag,i pack humble mags,thatll make you cuddle fast
lietrally,lyrically,you couldnt be above Splash in a Bubble Bath,

im gay? you must lie,every text battle your in you sound sad cause you cant touch the guys
you like actin high,im ditching''CANE''like the 95 year old man that just fuckin died,



you take that Route-Slowa,you perfer males,im just a Cloud-Blowah
as far as Stories,we dont even know if ARC is real or not,n' im not talking about Noah

i hate talkin about guys but you suck mass hoes,i got Class Bro!!
clay aiken said it best,the only thing deep about you is your Asshole,

-- Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:56 pm --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tha-d ... ml#p174995

Arcane:
1st bar: decent opener but very basic, nothing aimed directy at opponent (no personal) flow ok
2nd bar: basic imo... And well, are you trying to imply that all his opponent's no showed? Either way not very good
3rd bar: this was a nice punch, but again nothing personal (which isn't SUCH a bad thing) however it could be used against anyone
4th: this was much better, that qu yuan similie was dope
5th: nice punch but still basic, good attach on name
6th: good punch nice closer, set up was bad imo, but end execution was ok

Splash:
1st bar: nice punch, flow, decent use of simple multis and good nameplay
2nd bar: again good as the 1st
3rd bar : nice multies, lol did u mean literally? Punch was ok
4th: not that well executed, should've used a better set up, and ur flow was nice from the start of the verse till here
5th: nice nameplay again, good bar overall
6th: nice punch although nothing aim directly at opponent, decent closer

arcane you got lines, but you need ta word 'em better and go more in depth with that and the complexity of it all, keep writing

splash try n just introduce more concepts and creativety in ur verses, like in this 4 example like 5 bars u were labelling the opponent gay and a fag, it brings down creativety in the overall verse
ok.. The vote

Flow: arcane had a decent flow, splash kept consistent really well throughout except in the bar i mentioned, arcane was a very fluent read so he gets this
Multis: splash, easy
Punches: both had good punches, so i'mma give this a tie
Personals: splash had more nameplay attacks and more witty ones than arcane as well
enjoyment: splash had a better verse overall

MVGT: SplashKING

rtf
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This battle wasnt bad,had one or two good lines...punches:imo splash came a lil harder personals:again splash multies:splash flow:arcane nameplay:tie enjoyment:splash mvgt splashking

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---Battle Rules
These rules are always in effect unless stated
differently by the battlers.

-No feeding, flipping, biting or recycling.


your rhymes declined, why don't you read the signs/
like crippled drug dealers you can't deliver your lines/

vs

at the gay-club your the Bar-Maid,witness death leave you deeper than a sharp-blade
your verses are more playedout than an Arcade

flow-arc punch-arc pers-0 multi-0 wplay-arc


from a KING to peasent, you believe your style is pleasent?/
you were in 25 battles and in 13 the competition wasn't present/

vs

wondering what mans next,you faggit im tighter than your 80's Spandex
you couldnt drop 6 dope bars if you had 17 boxes of Xanax

punch-sk flow-arc perso-arc multi-0 wplay-sk


your disses deficient, i'm a lyrical delinquent/
not buying your style, not interested in cheap clearance equipment/

vs

your fucked you troubled fag,i pack humble mags,thatll make you cuddle fast
lietrally,lyrically,you couldnt be above Splash in a Bubble Bath,

flow-tie multi-sk punch-0 perso-0 wplay/nplay-0


on a killing spree, if you run i decapitate your knee/
so like Qu Yuan i'll leave YOU SPLASHing in the sea/

vs

im gay? you must lie,every text battle your in you sound sad cause you cant touch the guys
you like actin high,im ditching''CANE''like the 95 year old man that just fuckin died,

this is canes 1st battle sk is feeding off of this verse and as the houserules are clearly stated as being the rules in this battle i move for a dq also sk's 1st bar he tried to flip the gaybar also grounds for dq anyways

punch-arc nplay-sk flow-arc multi-0 perso-0


take a step in my den, how are YOU dope with the pen?/
when "SPLASH" is dance a bar for homosexual MEN/

vs

you take that Route-Slowa,you perfer males,im just a Cloud-Blowah
as far as Stories,we dont even know if ARC is real or not,n' im not talking about Noah

flow-arc punch-arc nplay-tie multi-arc perso-0


i'll have you rethinking, and winning catagoury just shrinking/
put you in deep waters but MADISON couldn't save SPLASH from sinking/

vs

i hate talkin about guys but you suck mass hoes,i got Class Bro!!
clay aiken said it best,the only thing deep about you is your Asshole

well i could do cats but i prefer to just judge the final bar simply on quality and sting
arc's closer is better

this was a decent battle of the entire thing there was only one true personal and that was an attack on sk w/l record its really not to hard to research your opponent for that reason this battle seemed a little universal but dont get me wrong there was some decent attempts at nameplay which makes for better direct attacks both were a bit basic but arc had better structure and less gramatical errors @sk there is a huge difference between your and you're and i really dislike correcting a written piece in my head just cus i know what you meant also like noted in dark's vote 5 out of 6 bars you were on some gay shit which implies a lack of creativity and alas my vote

overall enjoyment Arcane MVGT Arcane

uhmmm sorry bitch,,battle was over at 2-0 you faggit ass hoe

watch ya fucking mouth splash...the battles one thing disrespecting someone for giving an opinion did u see me shit talking when u got those votes? no...so get the tentacles out of your ass and try to get all fired up

(stabs arcanes mom off dick than shits on her and uses arcanes face for toilet paper )

Splash wrote:uhmmm sorry bitch,,battle was over at 2-0 you faggit ass hoe

FIRST OF ALL, NO. A BATTLE IS OVER AT 3-0. OR 4-1, OR FIRST TO 5. SO YOU ARE WRONG. THIS IS NOT ONLY FREE POSTING BUT YOU SEEM TO SHOW A HIGH LEVEL OF STUPIDITY WHICH YOU'VE BEEN WARNED ABOUT.

Splash wrote:(stabs arcanes mom off dick than shits on her and uses arcanes face for toilet paper )

^ CONSIDER YOURSELF DISQUALIFIED. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED, DQ'D, SO THE NEXT STEP IS BANISHMENT. THIS IS A SITE FOR ADULTS YOU TWERP. IF YOU DON'T KNOW HOW TO BEHAVE LIKE ONE FEEL FREE TO GO FLING SHIT AT MY16 OR SOMETHING. THIS IS THE TEXT BATTLE GROUNDS. NOT TALK SHIT IN FREE POSTS TO WHOEVER THE HELL YOU FEEL LIKE IT.