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10 bars by tomorrow u down splash queen?

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FUCK DAT BITCH,you barely worth 3bars you faggit so youll get a 4 bar battle, better make it good ...pussy

Knew u were gonna be scared u predictable piece of crum shit.. u told ME to set it up... 10 bars and get off ur rag..

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-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:10 pm --

No crew votes either

-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:56 pm --

Check u fucking ass clown

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/eckst ... 22661.html

Ur outofbounds pleasin sirs,you pick guys,i blow clouds so you cant see me beastier
like Splash King, but King Rums going down easier...

some bitch on my dick while something similar is upon which you spit,
dont mention battling,in gay marriages is when your actually king of the ring

you be on the Ferris Feelin Rappuh'z,not embarrased kneelin fastah,
in rooms full of fire and im throwing RUM in..... #Paris hilton Swagga

just ask brain,the mic is my swag,im fresh you ass-stain,
we'll see whos king,you fag ya mad,you couldnt be in 'the game' if the name was MAX PAYNE

Hoeskie you act dumb,why now? lyrically your trying things from phonies,
ill SPLASH - RUM upon the ground,,r.i.p. all my homies,

you totter gays blingin,you winnings more random than a rocker named Cleveland
excluding me, KING dont matter and this aint Modern Day England

go eat cum,your homo ass likes to blow joe,
Im devouring RUM all over the place,like im the Hobos in this MoFo

actin like your bad for lieing,and you aint out at all
punches goin dumb,splashking Rocked Rum and my shirt wasnt Advertising Alcohol

you keep on rubbin doggy's,while me and your mother practice fuckin karate
im pitching Rum like Im lovin bacardi,Rum couldnt have bars at a fuckin party

only in courage the cowardly dog,do you kill thangs,ill make you feel pain
now that im finished wit RUM,he'll have 2 L's faster than LiL wayne

This Guys LINES cudnt be felt even if it wuz COKE on a table...
Its a fine line between fine dimes n u being a bitch in my stable ...


Hogtied by ur ankles..with ur luck ull get tangled n accidentally strangled...
Or ull try to escape like a gazelle being hunted by a pack of bengals...


Wuts my angle? How ever I'm aiming this gun..heat u hotter then the3rd ROCK FROM THE SUN...
u hv no stamina u need 2 extra lungs..to give me props this kids gonna need 22 extra thumbs...

I'm done wit this clown..I don't know y he tried to be IT...
y don't u try being Mr hanky..only time he'll ever be thee SHIT!!!..

From the Chi to south park ill bruise u n ur crews ...
Like I do my bitches after I devour the biggest boos...
He wana snooze n lose the proof tht his bars were no harder then the illest news...


U probably take rhymes more then u BITE ur finger nails ...
Fuckin dumbass I'm sure ur FLYas hell..u got wings n ur a bitch tinier then tinker bell...


King splash Don't get ass kicked..u hv no battle tatics ...
u prolly got ur Nick name from swim practice ...


U cud feed tht.. beat u faster then speed bags....
How cud u be a rhyme master...he don't Even give decent feed back...


King splash user name shud be king fag...
U replied slower to my call out then the site wen it lags...


SPLASH wana know who the real KING be..
Let u do the honors..KING ME..
U WISH u cud beat me..maybe u shuda brung a Jeanie ...

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VOTE LINK: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/jstee ... 22725.html

Vote Splash For A CATSWEEP!!!TKO!

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Chess wat are u talkin about?


Anyway imo

Punches- splashes hit harder
Multis- Rum urs seem forced in alot of ur lines so, splash
Enjoyment- splash.. "Go eat cum" lol i didnt like that bit, sounds a little corny but it made me laugh.
Personals- Splash stayed consistant. Rum only half ur verse had any personals. So splash
Flow- Splash seemed alot cleaner.

MVGT splash.

Nice battle yo, rum i can see
potential man but u gotta stay
consistant with ur flow and really
hit harder with those punches fam
Stay up n props to u splash.
Ive seen nothin but good battling
from u. Obviously always room to
improve tho.

Nice battle

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Chessboards vote is invalid. He is SplashKings crew member, and as rules state:

King Rum wrote: -- Sat Jun 18, 2011 2:10 pm --

No crew votes either

-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:56 pm --

Check u fucking ass clown

Votes open at 1-0, with splash in the lead.

Ayt...okay battle imo...Punches:splash came harder for me,better hit flow:splash was smoother than rum,easier to read multies:splash was better personals:kingrum:enjoyment:splash mvgt splashking

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Good guys...
but this very obvious

readin both shit over n over again, king rum twist splash neck honestly , he has some crazy punches than splash.

MVGT=KING RUM

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punches; king
flow; the other king
multies; king
wordplay; king

mvgt; king rum

your gettin better doggie

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Splash's Verse

Ur outofbounds pleasin sirs,you pick guys,i blow clouds so you cant see me beastier
like Splash King, but King Rums going down easier...

Nah man, this doesnt really hit at all for me, multi's arent that great, and there's practically no wordplay.

some bitch on my dick while something similar is upon which you spit,
dont mention battling,in gay marriages is when your actually king of the ring

The flow is off here, and your just continuing to call him gay names without coming original or creative with your punch... No wordplay again.

you be on the Ferris Feelin Rappuh'z,not embarrased kneelin fastah,
in rooms full of fire and im throwing RUM in..... #Paris hilton Swagga

This is more like it

just ask brain,the mic is my swag,im fresh you ass-stain,
we'll see whos king,you fag ya mad,you couldnt be in 'the game' if the name was MAX PAYNE

At least the ass stain is a wordplay mixed with your gay dissing, but the Max Payne line could have been incorporated to hit harder in my opinion

Hoeskie you act dumb,why now? lyrically your trying things from phonies,
ill SPLASH - RUM upon the ground,,r.i.p. all my homies,

Once again, this is more like it. You should approach more of your bars in thie manner.

you totter gays blingin,you winnings more random than a rocker named Cleveland
excluding me, KING dont matter and this aint Modern Day England

This was a pretty cool concept and punch... The first line didnt really make sense to me though, because Cleveland is where the Rock Hall of Fame is, if Im not mistaken, so the ranom part just seemed off to me. Punch was done better than your others though.

go eat cum,your homo ass likes to blow joe,
Im devouring RUM all over the place,like im the Hobos in this MoFo

Weak ass multi's, honestly. That first line is just getting wayyyy to homo for me man... If you are going to bring punches to the table in regards to gay shit, at least make it creative so it doesnt seem like all you are thinking about it gay shit lol.

actin like your bad for lieing,and you aint out at all
punches goin dumb,splashking Rocked Rum and my shirt wasnt Advertising Alcohol

Acting like your bad for lying? What does that even mean exactly? The punch is a good concept though.

you keep on rubbin doggy's,while me and your mother practice fuckin karate
im pitching Rum like Im lovin bacardi,Rum couldnt have bars at a fuckin party

The bars concept is played extrememly so you have to come with something very original and creative when using it and it wasnt done here. Flowed well though. First line is weak in my opinion.

only in courage the cowardly dog,do you kill thangs,ill make you feel pain
now that im finished wit RUM,he'll have 2 L's faster than LiL wayne

This is weak.


Rum's Verse

This Guys LINES cudnt be felt even if it wuz COKE on a table...
Its a fine line between fine dimes n u being a bitch in my stable ...

This is wack, honestly... A bitch in a stable? They make stables for dogs? First line needs to be more creative.

Hogtied by ur ankles..with ur luck ull get tangled n accidentally strangled...
Or ull try to escape like a gazelle being hunted by a pack of bengals...

You could do alot with a concept like this, and you didnt really do much of anything with it.

Wuts my angle? How ever I'm aiming this gun..heat u hotter then the3rd ROCK FROM THE SUN...
u hv no stamina u need 2 extra lungs..to give me props this kids gonna need 22 extra thumbs...

No, man. This doesn't impress me.

I'm done wit this clown..I don't know y he tried to be IT...
y don't u try being Mr hanky..only time he'll ever be thee SHIT!!!..

Weak.

From the Chi to south park ill bruise u n ur crews ...
Like I do my bitches after I devour the biggest boos...
He wana snooze n lose the proof tht his bars were no harder then the illest news...

It seems like you are just talking/dissing instead of actually coming up with punchlines and wordplay bro.

U probably take rhymes more then u BITE ur finger nails ...
Fuckin dumbass I'm sure ur FLYas hell..u got wings n ur a bitch tinier then tinker bell...

First line is a failed attempt at wordplay, as you could have incorporated that much better. Second line is no good.

King splash Don't get ass kicked..u hv no battle tatics ...
u prolly got ur Nick name from swim practice ...

Lame.

U cud feed tht.. beat u faster then speed bags....
How cud u be a rhyme master...he don't Even give decent feed back...

This is probably your best bar so far.

King splash user name shud be king fag...
U replied slower to my call out then the site wen it lags...

Weak.

SPLASH wana know who the real KING be..
Let u do the honors..KING ME..
U WISH u cud beat me..maybe u shuda brung a Jeanie ...

Weak.



My vote goes to Splash King for more consistant punchlines, although both of you need to work on that. Hope the break down helps you both in the future. Peace.

SPLASH:
Ur outofbounds pleasin sirs,you pick guys,i blow clouds so you cant see me beastier
like Splash King, but King Rums going down easier...

EHH, NAH

some bitch on my dick while something similar is upon which you spit,
dont mention battling,in gay marriages is when your actually king of the ring

LOL, THIS WAS WEAK BUT FUNNY

you be on the Ferris Feelin Rappuh'z,not embarrased kneelin fastah,
in rooms full of fire and im throwing RUM in..... #Paris hilton Swagga

NO.

just ask brain,the mic is my swag,im fresh you ass-stain,
we'll see whos king,you fag ya mad,you couldnt be in 'the game' if the name was MAX PAYNE

NEEDS TO BE REWORDED

Hoeskie you act dumb,why now? lyrically your trying things from phonies,
ill SPLASH - RUM upon the ground,,r.i.p. all my homies,

LOL, NICE

you totter gays blingin,you winnings more random than a rocker named Cleveland
excluding me, KING dont matter and this aint Modern Day England

NICE TRY

go eat cum,your homo ass likes to blow joe,
Im devouring RUM all over the place,like im the Hobos in this MoFo

DECENT TRY

actin like your bad for lieing,and you aint out at all
punches goin dumb,splashking Rocked Rum and my shirt wasnt Advertising Alcohol

OKAY...

you keep on rubbin doggy's,while me and your mother practice fuckin karate
im pitching Rum like Im lovin bacardi,Rum couldnt have bars at a fuckin party

DECENT..

only in courage the cowardly dog,do you kill thangs,ill make you feel pain
now that im finished wit RUM,he'll have 2 L's faster than LiL wayne

NAH






RUM:This Guys LINES cudnt be felt even if it wuz COKE on a table...
Its a fine line between fine dimes n u being a bitch in my stable ...

NO.

Hogtied by ur ankles..with ur luck ull get tangled n accidentally strangled...
Or ull try to escape like a gazelle being hunted by a pack of bengals...

NAHH

Wuts my angle? How ever I'm aiming this gun..heat u hotter then the3rd ROCK FROM THE SUN...
u hv no stamina u need 2 extra lungs..to give me props this kids gonna need 22 extra thumbs...

NO.

I'm done wit this clown..I don't know y he tried to be IT...
y don't u try being Mr hanky..only time he'll ever be thee SHIT!!!..

NO.

From the Chi to south park ill bruise u n ur crews ...
Like I do my bitches after I devour the biggest boos...
He wana snooze n lose the proof tht his bars were no harder then the illest news...

NO.


U probably take rhymes more then u BITE ur finger nails ...
Fuckin dumbass I'm sure ur FLYas hell..u got wings n ur a bitch tinier then tinker bell...

NOT BAD

King splash Don't get ass kicked..u hv no battle tatics ...
u prolly got ur Nick name from swim practice ...

LOL, NO

U cud feed tht.. beat u faster then speed bags....
How cud u be a rhyme master...he don't Even give decent feed back...

NO.


King splash user name shud be king fag...
U replied slower to my call out then the site wen it lags...

BIIIG NO.

SPLASH wana know who the real KING be..
Let u do the honors..KING ME..
U WISH u cud beat me..maybe u shuda brung a Jeanie ...

GROSS.


SPLASH TOOK THIS IN EVERY CAT.
VOTE: SPLASH