Pest:
This kids a 'loser', hoppin from 'square to square' tryna gain respect/ Watch me take out this 'pawns knights', quikk to put this 'king in chekk'/
the set up n punch connects well, a simple concept but it came off good, nameplay and flow on point
i'll 'rearrange' this kids structure, witness the 'mur-king' of 'king- rum'/ You 'seem-dumb', i bet your 'king-dom' is under a 'queens- thumb'/
good nameplay, flow, multis
This dudes needsa bite some rhymes before he 'bites the dust'/ Cuz this 'kings' rhymes could never be 'golden', even with the 'midas touch'/
i liked the set up, punch was decent too
This noobs already old news, this is present-tense, talk shit, shoulda been 'hesitant'/ Cuz Your flows couldnt 'blow me away', if they were 'windy' like your 'residence'/
felt this a bit stretched, but the punch was executed well nonetheless
kingrum:
Pest control his nuts i'l fold hes just to small I can't see where he go.. How cud something so small spit a wack ass flow .... my barz are gold like the arts I sold.. That's why I'm in a castle and ur in a hole...
firstly I feel your bars are stretched too much, the punch is a bit basic but good play and names and flow is on point with structure
I wish u were a human so I cud attack you... Cuz I'm n animal chop u up n feed u to cannibals... Ur not even as big as my pinky toe u goin handle who?... I can eat u up in one bite I don't need to turn into Hannibal....
nothing really impressive, punch doesn't sting, but decent
I'm steady slappin u ur not worth the punch... Ur already ate up now where's my captain crunch... I'm not full at all I usually snack a bunch... But ur too small so ill skip str8 to brunch ...
nah not feeling it that much, could see your intents though u should of went onto a new subject instead of carrying size for 3 bars
We know ur super retarded, but u don't hv to be a dilhole... I think hes jus mad cuz he can't even stand against n armadillo ... U are a zero softer then pillow if u get married ill turn u to a widow... Cuz ur a lil bitch like this girl beating on my window ...Jo
stretched, basic imo too, and the punch doesn't hit hard enough for a closer
Punches: Pest had more creativety in his punches and executed them better, rum was a bit basic
Flow: Pest edged this with structure
Personals: tie ,both had good nameplays
Multis: Tie ,pest used them better though rum did have a few
Enjoyment: Tie ,didn't feel anything outstanding from either side, both had some good lines but this made for a decent battle at best, imo
MVGT:
pestoe_the_blest_one
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