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It's Hard Relieven The Pain, That I Release From The Brain,
When It Still Seems To Remain, An Seapin Deep In My Veins,
So I Started Creepin The Game, Bringin Peace To my Frame,
By Releasin The Heat I Proclaim, There's No Need For Me To Be Sane,
When You Got The Freedom To Say, What You Been Thinkin For Days,
Ever Since The Streets I Became, Hood Witted Wit A Speach To Be Made//

Just Some Ish' Went Off Tramatik's Flow..(props again)

http://illestlyrics.com/board/leave-um- ... t2297.html <--Link Since This Is my First Drop On This Thread

that was very similar to his. your first couple bars were kinda just his first couple re-worded. but i appreciate the link.

lmao ye we do now i think of it dude...daz krazy gud tho man nice drop keep doin ya thang homie -1-

Yeah, I Was Just Provin Somethin lol...Anyway Uh Ya Welcome?

Lol Word man, Thanks..ya Shit Was Hot To. When I Read your Drop Thought I Was Lookin In A Mirror..haha

lmfao no joke...we oughtta do a collab homie....

No Doubt Man, I'm Down. You got MSN Messenger Or Anything?

ye i got msn and AIM...my msn iz [email protected] and my aim iz KiLLaMiC88 get at me dawg 1

Uppin For Feed..

now thats the mac i remember, good shit dude, keep up the good work

Thanks Man.

tramatik did better in my opinion.. u kinda fell off towards the end of it, and yea the intro was pretty much just reworded

Hm I thought The Ending Was Better..But Ok..You Guys Just Missed The Concept Of This Whole Post....anyway Uh Thanks..

this was pretty good, solid rhyme scheme throughout nothing real creative but its straight for a short lil fuckaround piece

you should start writing with a rhyme scheme like that in battles

Word Thanks..

I Try To Use That 'Structure' In Battles, I'm Just Not That Expierenced With Battles, Text Battles At That. But I'm Tryin To Elevate. Thanks For The Feed Though.