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House Rules.

4 bars due 48 hours after Chess's check in.

Ill post my two links with my drop.

Cheq!

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FootNotes:

2nd Bar: He made a thread admitting he sucked and needed help lol > http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/help- ... 22949.html

3rd Bar: A knight, can only move in forms of "L".

No battles to vote on, sorry.

He's more like Breast Cancer,I'm like the killer in boobs!you prefer dick thats sweeter n smooth!|no battler youre more of a speaker In duels,its no wonder you couldnt Dust Board as a Teacher At School!||The reaper has proved,that youre weaker n screwed,see this is simple...Im fuckin rude n im proud!|still shuttin you in a crowd,n you can spit raps...You'll never get the Feed Back...Stuffin Food In a Mouth!||Rap aint for you...Buddy,drop out!kick to the chest till ya tummy pop out!|I might have admitted to being wack but I still got the Punches'll That'll Put You Down worse than a Ali Knockout!||Man your entire styles a joke,your grammar too!,ill wrap your neck around with Splinters N Shit|your gay,im into those Singers Wit Tits!n i can spit raps n have you Raise Ya Hands like you had Fingers For Kids|| - Chess'11...

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Interesting battle to say the least. Baron came with some nice lines, i think the grammatical is just for emphasis and an extra subliminal since he started off callin chess "stoup'd". B had some decent personals, my favorite bar out of the battle was your second one, ""Halp! I'm a retard and need HALP!" Well, shaddup you dumb Whiney bitch
Caps and some smiley shit doesn't hide you write like your Heineys dicked "

Chess, you came second, and it feels like you broke one of the house rules, "-No feeding, flipping, biting or recycling." SplashKing got DQ'd a while back for flipping his opponents verse, it's a rule for a reason even if it wasn't meant to be broken.

Other than that here are my scores:

Multies: Chess
Flow: Baron
Personals: Baron
Punches: Chess
Enjoyment: Tie

This one is really close for me, Baron still has some technical growth but shows he does his homework. Chess, the formatting made it difficult to follow the flow and the grammar was off in several places which threw things off in the read. With the flipping deal though, MVGT: Baron

I wasn't flipping,I was countering...which is why I didn't make a punch out of the the flip...but thnx for voting man,the flippin won't happen again.you can dq me if that's what has to be done.

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I dont care... flip it. Grammatical errors or Wordplay... hmmm... Votes Please

catsweep to baron...

he came harder though it was a weak battle. punches were pretty much universal on both parts...

@chess... countering is flipping man.

mvgt baron

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Baron... you came OK.... i was expecting more.... but ehhh... some of the punches had real potential but could have been worded better... multis were a lil sloppy but.... flow was there

Chess... how many times are u gonna drop a verse structured like this before u listen to people... I personally think the structure hurts not only the readers perspective but the writers as well.... in audio it doesn't seem to matter cause u have control of delivery but in text people cant capture it

i broke ur verse down into bars so i can explain and maybe u will understand

He's more like Breast Cancer,I'm like the killer in boobs!you prefer dick thats sweeter n smooth!|
no battler youre more of a speaker In duels,its no wonder you couldnt Dust Board as a Teacher At School!||

The reaper has proved,that youre weaker n screwed,see this is simple...Im fuckin rude n im proud!|
still shuttin you in a crowd,n you can spit raps...You'll never get the Feed Back...Stuffin Food In a Mouth!||

Rap aint for you...Buddy,drop out!kick to the chest till ya tummy pop out!|
I might have admitted to being wack but I still got the Punches'll That'll Put You Down worse than a Ali Knockout!||

Man your entire styles a joke,your grammar too!,ill wrap your neck around with Splinters N Shit|
your gay,im into those Singers Wit Tits!n i can spit raps n have you Raise Ya Hands like you had Fingers For Kids||

now some of ur bars are tightly written with good flow but...

look how s..t..r..e..t..c..h..e..d some of ur bars are.... with no inner multis no complex rhyme scheme nothin

now if the pumches were great then it wouldn't be huge... but there not
in fact baron outdid you on most of them....

all in all mvgt Baron... but not by alot

Baron came a lot harder, chess flipped. GAME OVA
Baron is my vote.

a real close decision,not a very strong battle,but
-Punches-chess
-Flow-baron
-Personals-tie,yall both came weak here
-Multies-tie,
-Enjoyment -baron

MVGT baron