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5 bars

50 post to vote

since we both agreed to terms no check

72hrs to post then u lose

everything else is house rules

I'll sever ye head off ya shoulders n just be dropping boulders to these flopping soldiers think y'all get it popping?? bogus!
from the top view you'll look like a donut, now take that imagery & envision my dick deep in yo girl, calico screamin don't nut!!!!

oh fuck

Dark Side consists of kings, y'all fly?? we rip off ya wings! engage you fag n don't get glad I ain't talkin bout a ring,
I'll box atcha ya throat, stomp till ya choke, drown ya in a hot spring, till ya sound more fucked up than flava fav when he sings!


always online, faggot don't you have a life? man you must be string's wife, gay like light browsin through pics of males on sites..* (spews)

I'll turn the elitists to defeatist n have 'em runnin to clinics, !!Dark Prince!! you can't beat this nor achieve this with cha gimmicks
I'll leave you finished & diminished n pop-eyes with no spinach, you from ballerstatus' sewage but ain't shit on illestlyrics!!**

(yawn)

^ the steaks are too low to be actually beefin so I'mma just get my smack-on n give this rookie a beating,
ye head must pain if ye think we're actually competing, oh shit hey somebody get a tampon for this pussy he's bleeding!
!!



* calico, enlightend and 3rd string qb are in the elitist crew
**in this crew battle series, the 1st battle between blake and light, light posted a pic of blake and some gay guy, they also posted pics of guys in the shoutbox and disturbingly looked like they were enjoyin it
*** he came from another rap website called ballerstatus

Edit:
My vote link: (only one open battle)
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/leero ... ml#p177159

Therre needs to be some limitation the way im ~SlayinN you Ho~,
~Playing the Role~ you openly begging for mercy as if ~Prayings in Vogue~

~Span all Night~ delayed the Battle to Dodge Me… you ~Planned in Spite~
~Man or Mite?~ too scared to rematch…Dark Peon just ~ Ran from ‘Light~ (FACTS!!!)

~Stop Lyin~…The Dark Prince your so flawed you need a fuckin ~SpotShine~
You could be suicidal and know you couldnt touch a ~Hot Line/HotLine~.

Never been in a battle as they are always classified ~Massacres~,
Got history book glossaries of extinct rappers…don’t make me ~Chapter ya~.

~Park right with my Goons~….next to you the glock ~Spark, Lights, then it Booms~,
Your Raps are Half-Azzed…I guess im getting ~‘The Dark Side’ of the “Moon”~.

-- Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:49 pm --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/leero ... ml#p177150

This is the only battle that was open that wasnt in my Crew.

Interesting battle to say the least. I'll get right into the judging tho:

Flow: Goes to Calico

Dark Prince's lines were too extended for my tastes, not exactly bad, but strrrrrreeeeeeeetched definitely.

Punches: Even though the lines where stretched, Prince had better punches. This line was a beast:

"I'll leave you finished & diminished n pop-eyes with no spinach, you from ballerstatus' sewage but ain't shit on illestlyrics"

Multies: Cold part is, I can use the same example here as well. Prince's multies helped the flow along, it seemed like Calico's multies where there coincidentally. Prince.

Personals: The strongest personal that Calico dropped that could be considered a play would be Dark Peon ran from light and darkside of the moon. Both work well, but Prince kept on the gas. It felt like he did his homework, the gay pic drop, the previous site, it just came harder. Prince.

Enjoyability: Tie

Good battle I enjoyed both competitors, but this one goes to Prince.

OKAY THIS IS VERY CLOSE SO BEAR WITH ME...

DARK PRINCE (YOUR VERSE WAS VERY ENJOYABLE TO ME, HOWEVER IN A TEXT BATTLE IT IS VERY EFFECTIVE THAT THE READERS "SEE YOUR PUNCH". THIS WAS SOMETHING MORE FOR AUDIO, AND TEXT SOUNDS CAN DRY YOUR VERSE. LET THE READER DETERMINE THE ENJOYABILITY OF THE DROP NEXT TIME)

I'll sever ye head off ya shoulders n just be dropping boulders to these flopping soldiers think y'all get it popping?? bogus!
from the top view you'll look like a donut, now take that imagery & envision my dick deep in yo girl, calico screamin don't nut!!!!

oh fuck (FUNNY FOR AUDIO, BUT IN A TEXT BATTLE.. BARS ARE IMPORTANT. THIS MADE NO SENSE AND AUTOMATICALLY GAVE NO OPENING FOR YOUR PUNCH. YOU COULD SAY THIS IS FILLER UNLESS YOU ARE MAKING A PUNCH TO CALICO'S GIRL)

Dark Side consists of kings, y'all fly?? we rip off ya wings! engage you fag n don't get glad I ain't talkin bout a ring,
I'll box atcha ya throat, stomp till ya choke, drown ya in a hot spring, till ya sound more fucked up than flava fav when he sings!
(UGH! YOU DID WELL UNTIL THE FLAVA FLAV PART. THE BUILD-UP WAS HORRORCORE AND COULD HAVE WENT INTO A HORRORCORE PUNCH. INSTEAD YOU WENT INTO A DIFFERENT DIRECTION WHICH ULTIMATELY CONFUSES THE READER.)

always online, faggot don't you have a life? man you must be string's wife, gay like light browsin through pics of males on sites..* (spews)<---ANOTHER NO NO
(OK)
I'll turn the elitists to defeatist n have 'em runnin to clinics, !!Dark Prince!! you can't beat this nor achieve this with cha gimmicks
I'll leave you finished & diminished n pop-eyes with no spinach, you from ballerstatus' sewage but ain't shit on illestlyrics!!**
(DEFEATIST IS NOT A WORD, AND POPEYE WITH NO SPINACH IS A WASTE OF A PUNCH. YOU COULD HAVE RE-WORDED THE BAR TO STREAM A MORE EFFECTIVE PUNCH.)
(yawn)<---- IN TEXT BATTLE'S THIS IS A NO NO!!

^ the steaks are too low to be actually beefin so I'mma just get my smack-on n give this rookie a beating,
ye head must pain if ye think we're actually competing, oh shit hey somebody get a tampon for this pussy he's bleeding!
!! (THE BEST PART OF THE DROP. IT MADE SENSE ALTHOUGH IF YOU HAD RE-WORDED IT, YOU COULD'VE HAD AN EFFECTIVE PUNCH.)

NOT BAD FOR A BEGINNER, I SEE MULTIPLE FLAWS. DON'T TAKE MY CRITIC TO HEART. I HAD A LOT OF DEFECTS IN MY EARLY DAYS ON ILLEST, (AND STILL DO). IT'S EASIER FOR ANOTHER READER TO POINT OUT BAD HABITS TO HELP US BECOME BETTER WRITERS.

CALICO YOU ALSO NEED WORK AS WELL, HOWEVER YOUR DROP WAS A BIT MORE BEARABLE IMO. YOU STUCK TO THE CLASSIC FORMAT OF TEXT BATTLING. THIS HELPED ME TO READ YOUR PUNCHES AND ENJOY THE DROP MYSELF.

Therre needs to be some limitation the way im ~SlayinN you Ho~,
~Playing the Role~ you openly begging for mercy as if ~Prayings in Vogue~
NICE
~Span all Night~ delayed the Battle to Dodge Me… you ~Planned in Spite~
~Man or Mite?~ too scared to rematch…Dark Peon just ~ Ran from ‘Light~ (FACTS!!!)
OK
~Stop Lyin~…The Dark Prince your so flawed you need a fuckin ~SpotShine~
You could be suicidal and know you couldnt touch a ~Hot Line/HotLine~.
WASTE MANAGEMENT, COULD'VE RE-WORDED BETTER
Never been in a battle as they are always classified ~Massacres~,
Got history book glossaries of extinct rappers…don’t make me ~Chapter ya~.
NO
~Park right with my Goons~….next to you the glock ~Spark, Lights, then it Booms~,
Your Raps are Half-Azzed…I guess im getting ~‘The Dark Side’ of the “Moon”~. BEST PART OF THE DROP AND A DOPE CLOSER THAT MADE SENSE

MVGT: CALICO
GREAT JOB GUYS, VERY CLOSE EITHER WAY.

mvgt: cal

flow: cal
punches: cal (cuz he came hard without have 2bar bars)
multies: tie
personals: tie (it was close imo)
wordplay:cal

[ Post made via Windows Smartphone ]

The Battle is over (4-1) but the other two votes that I got werre erased when the site crashed or whatever happened. Leeroi Green and M33kish came in and voted for Me also. K-Panda is about to close this. Good Battle The Dark Prince.

I'll sever ye head off ya shoulders n just be dropping boulders to these flopping soldiers think y'all get it popping?? bogus!
from the top view you'll look like a donut, now take that imagery & envision my dick deep in yo girl, calico screamin don't nut!!!! (7/10 this was confusing with rhyme play, but nice hits)

oh fuck

Dark Side consists of kings, y'all fly?? we rip off ya wings! engage you fag n don't get glad I ain't talkin bout a ring,
I'll box atcha ya throat, stomp till ya choke, drown ya in a hot spring, till ya sound more fucked up than flava fav when he sings! (lol 8/10)


always online, faggot don't you have a life? man you must be string's wife, gay like light browsin through pics of males on sites..* (spews)(6/10 eh)

I'll turn the elitists to defeatist n have 'em runnin to clinics, !!Dark Prince!! you can't beat this nor achieve this with cha gimmicks
I'll leave you finished & diminished n pop-eyes with no spinach, you from ballerstatus' sewage but ain't shit on illestlyrics!!** (6.5/10)

(yawn)

^ the steaks are too low to be actually beefin so I'mma just get my smack-on n give this rookie a beating,
ye head must pain if ye think we're actually competing, oh shit hey somebody get a tampon for this pussy he's bleeding! (5/10 didn't like this closer bro)
!!
(32.5/50)

vs.

Therre needs to be some limitation the way im ~SlayinN you Ho~,
~Playing the Role~ you openly begging for mercy as if ~Prayings in Vogue~(7/10 decent opener)

~Span all Night~ delayed the Battle to Dodge Me… you ~Planned in Spite~
~Man or Mite?~ too scared to rematch…Dark Peon just ~ Ran from ‘Light~ (FACTS!!!) (7/10)

~Stop Lyin~…The Dark Prince your so flawed you need a fuckin ~SpotShine~
You could be suicidal and know you couldnt touch a ~Hot Line/HotLine~. (lol 8/10)

Never been in a battle as they are always classified ~Massacres~,
Got history book glossaries of extinct rappers…don’t make me ~Chapter ya~.(7.5 nice hit)

~Park right with my Goons~….next to you the glock ~Spark, Lights, then it Booms~,
Your Raps are Half-Azzed…I guess im getting ~‘The Dark Side’ of the “Moon”~. (7 decent closer)
(36.5)

mvgt: Calico