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On this track.. i took alot of questions that people asked me about God and i wrote a track for it.. im sure others have questions out there for God, If you have questions for God and want to take the 2nd verse.. jump on it... i got 1st, 3rd and hook already done.. if you interested then just record it and send me it... Thanks
So there is this question i wanted to ask
there isnt an easy way to ask this, so im just going to ask it.
WHY? WHY?
Why would you do what you did?
Why do you want me to do what you want me to do?
WHY??
Whats the existance of life? Am i just living to die?
Question is are you a lie? or do i need to realize?
Theres a little quote in the bible that comes to say
You will pave up my path and that you will show me the way
The Devil has used it and fused it Just dont know why you dont do it
Just lose it and thrash it and just throw it away
Took you 6 days to build it so just build it again
And forget about this world that is corrupted by sin
Its hard to follow a man that is written in a book
Cuz its just bits and pieces of his life that they took
Dont help with the situation of the modern day nation
there is pieces of the puzzle thats missing with youth we facin
Did jesus get beat with boards, extension cords?
Did he watch his parents go through a deviorce?
How do you know if your going to get to go to heaven?
This is just some but i got some more questions and that is
WHY GOD?
Would you send your only son to go die on a cross for somebody like me?
WHY GOD?
Would you take all the time to chisel off all the grime that you care not to see?
WHY GOD?
Would you not do it yourself You want us to do it but we come to you for help?
WHY GOD?
Whats the reason or Purpose to keep it behind the curtain when you certain
When your people are hurting?
Whys there so many different religions?
Thats making defective christian Thats starting fiction religions
how do i know which is true?
Whys there so many beliefs thats believing and living around you?
Theres so many churchs that all read different bibles
Are they true and reliable when they do a revival?
Or are they just doing the motions and praying to idols
lying to the youth and tell them that they are liable?
How do i make up my sins? what if im sinning again?
How do i keep the devil from going and getting up in?
Tell me about the rapture and also the tribulation
Whats up with recarnation? Is it part of your creation?
Are you really real or am I just playing pretend?
Are you coming back or is death really the end?
How do you know if your going to get to go to heaven?
This is just some but i got some more questions and that is
WHY GOD?
Would you send your only son to go die on a cross for somebody like me?
WHY GOD?
Would you take all the time to chisel off all the grime that you care not to see?
WHY GOD?
Would you not do it yourself You want us to do it but we come to you for help?
WHY GOD?
Whats the reason or Purpose to keep it behind the curtain when you certain
When your people are hurting?
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
i like this piano melody. with the thunder and rain it brings the track in nice. i like the direction of it man. you chose a creative way to bring those questions to the table. alot of emotion in it as usual. you got a nice lil style on it.
Thanks bro.. I will finish it up if no1 jumps on to it...
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
This song is pretty dope, I found it hard to understand you at some times though. You speed up your rapping and slur the words together bad. I would jump on this if I could.
Write a verse... this is to any1 that has qustions for god.. i dont really speed up, but thanks for the constructive criticism
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
First off glad to see you droppin again....the lyrics in this track are soo real man, def. filled with quality and perspective...I like the chorus very str8 forward and thought provoking, good stuff man
Yeah ... the beat is cool ... I like the filter you have on your voice on the intro ... I like your delivery but in a couple spots there's the awkwardness and I usually say the problem is with the writing ... but I was able to spit what you had without as many problems because I started faster earlier on the long bars ... I think you should just sit and try to kinda "da da da" get free with different lines and experiment ... make sure you're alone cause you'll sound like an idiot ... but you'll eventually hit a groove that smooths everything out ....
So ... The good things are that you have made some nice rhymes ... stayed on your concept ... brought legit flow ... a nice beat and good production ... NOT BAD at all ... Solid shit!!!
(I'm really not trying to focus on the areas of improvement but ... that's why we're here right? ... My man ... Keep doing your thing!!!)
Thanks guys, this really help me alot.. and the collab is still open so if anyone have questions for God.. let them drop..
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
Deciple...you are a beast son. No joke. You never fail to impress me with your aggressive, inspirational & energetic presentations. For a Christian Rapper you really help change the bar for other artists who may consider you soft for your choice of musical following under the hip-hop category. Have you ever heard of the artists REHAB? If not...look them up, I think you'd really enjoy them because when I hear you...they're the first thing that comes to mind. Believe me when I say this...it's a compliment. There isn't much more I can say other than what I've told you here and in some of your previous sharings on illest. You're a talented dude...no doubt.
Thanks Homie, Im glad you enjoyed it, its always rewarding getting a "veteran" of illest complimenting and just more then that giving good advice.. Definitely appreciate what you say.. I respect and take it all to heart..
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
really liked this homie, shit wish had your flow ona mic.
some parts sounded like the enunciation of some of the end bars were hard to hear as well as other parts but the quality was real good and presence on the mic defintly seems comfortable. like the delivery and approach with this. i knew a christian hiphop dude on AIM called Micflowave. yall would made a dope ass team lol. stay grindin
@Antimatter Thanks man, yeah i am working at the enunciation part of my raps... im getting better and hope i get it mastered one day... thanks for listening and enjoying my stuff homie
@TreTru Thanks for the time of listening man... Yeah, this is only a rough draft.. and the 2nd verse is open for anyone that wants to jump on.. if they have a verse they want to speak about there wonders and questions towards the high power, go ahead and spit it.. ill def RTF tho.
Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
great topic gave me chills, this is something i ask myself as well u worded it very nicely, got ur message across flow was great!
my favorite:
"Theres a little quote in the bible that comes to say
You will pave up my path and that you will show me the way
The Devil has used it and fused it Just dont know why you dont do it"
Whys there so many different religions?
Thats making defective christian Thats starting fiction religions
how do i know which is true?
Whys there so many beliefs thats believing and living around you?
Theres so many churchs that all read different bibles
Are they true and reliable when they do a revival?
Or are they just doing the motions and praying to idols
lying to the youth and tell them that they are liable?
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