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Throw fists that dent up ya frail dough body
He's just this nitwit a pale nobody
A limp dick faggot who cant nail hotties
though he wouldn't want to, he chase male bodies
vocab weaker than his lame ass muscles
the boy aint eager but we bout to go way past tussles
concoct his death in a beaker at my table, im'a kill this tweeker
wipe him off my sneaker, bitch you couldnt get loud if you shouted through a speaker
Give you just a peek-a what i can do with the sweep-a
fleece ya for ya life send you straight to the reap-a

Focused with rage!.. scrape you aside after ya ripped apart.. broken in 8ths
I got this prey in my sights.. this cat be tearing red ducks up all over the place!
No polite shit.. ima do this thing properly and redux wont survive this
You aint got ya heart in!.. ya efforts missed the beat so they’ll be no reviving*
Was you a rejected kid? you got wack rhymes and i’m not impressed with it!..
So you’ll get voters scratching there heads.. but thanks to ya crab invested chick
Ya shits feeble.. your a strange one.. I should ask if what you do is legal?
No wonder you talk shit.. you swallow it when ya at ya weird interactions with people**
I’ll be killing this cunt.. ya shits undeveloped.. did you finish school son?
Ive seen ya list of rappers and shit.. if you was there you’d be the billionth one**

*Definition of redux is brought back.. revive
**Check his profile

Without a doubt in my mind, I'm voting for Felon. He brought a bit better rhyme schemes, flow was longer than reds, but his concepts were better, as well as punches. Red, not bad for your first battle, just try aiming at your opponent more. If i can copy and paste your verse against someone else, and it still make complete sense, somethings wrong man.


MVGT Felon.

Yeah, Felon takes thiss. Had some good attempts at metaphors and a more creative rhyme scheme. No doubt, but Redux got potential man. Keep at it mah man!!

Cats sweeep

VOTE FELON

Felon attacked his opponent more, and came more consistant with a little more creativity. While I dont consider this a great battle by any means, I think both of you showed alot of potential in this match-up, and I would like to see a re-match down the road after you sharpen your skills. Nice battle guys.


Vote- Felon


Felon wins KO. Records updated and thread closed.