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i script quik witted sick shit, its so simplistic,
its not linguistics or physics, but ecliptic,
so sit and witness me handle my bizniss,
who wanna risk it, gettin there wrist slit,
fuck the critics, they couldnt of predicted,
my diss to simply rip discs, and brake trax like slipped disks,
yall bout as hard as limp dicks, fuckin cheap trix wit big tits,
bunch of misfits, wit outfitts mismatched thats miss fits,
pricks that are senceless, im relentless ina sentence,
a menace rippin out teeth like a dentist,
chop yuh nutz off and play tennis, jus call me dennis,
witta snake bite im infectious like venom,
im all over your chix like denom,
sendin my sperm friends in swimmin in woman,
ive been sinnin since the beginnin,
ill stretch ya neck like the 7th innin,
im winnin, by spinnin heads like rims wit,
sprewells, i fight wit free will, when im writin my raps,
you jus happened to step right in my path,
im blinded wit wrath, from so many knives in the back,
jus try to attack, ill putta rhyme ina track to slice up yuh back,
spines will jus crack, mimes will jus laugh,
at you in the face cuz in every1's eyes yous is a fag,
if you got one ive always got 2 in the bag,
ill prove it wit facts, i move doom like iraq,
fuck crack my drugs weeds, you cunt teeth
you jus mad cuz your bitch loves me,
and you couldnt touch me, wit exstacy, weed and money,
and some booze in it, a hallucinigen, and your clueless again....

http://illestlyrics.com/board/quick-spi ... t2375.html

dammit i always forget the link thingamuhbobber

its all good, just edit your first post.

ill edit this with feedback a little later.

i fixed it

that was tight man.

i script quik witted sick shit, its so simplistic,
its not linguistics or physics, but ecliptic,
so sit and witness me handle my bizniss,
who wanna risk it, gettin there wrist slit,
fuck the critics, they couldnt of predicted,
my diss to simply rip discs, and brake trax like slipped disks,
yall bout as hard as limp dicks, fuckin cheap trix wit big tits,
bunch of misfits, wit outfitts mismatched thats miss fits,

^favorite part. I kinda started to fall off in the middle, and never really picked back up. I mean, it was still pretty ill, just not as tight as the beginning. Over all a really tight drop, it just lacked consistancy all the wy through. stay up and keep dropin.

thanx man