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8 Bars - house rules


Punches:
Personals:
flow:
nampeplay/wordplay:
Creativity:
Enjoyment:
Overall:


due by tomorrow midnight

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Soon as quix spits the chicks, split like atoms in physics
battle's with lyrics, speed of light an faster limits,
but your still destined for a dead last finish in a matter of minutes.
70+ battles yet your still not respected
daddy raped lil sis screaming bitch, yet you felt you got neglected
coz he wouldnt suck you off when hearing this, your cock erected.
I forgot to mention, your on a pension, We know your old style, docile, bone idle,
confined to a computer desk, coz ur useless legs no longer mobile.
so quit the gangster talk , an grow a fuckin real pair
before i put a Leg end(legend out) out an trip you out of ya weelchair.
I'll do it double quick, realise the trouble quix
who you fucking wit?, the up an coming kid
your up a shitty puddle an you haven't got a wooden stick
the spazzy kid that captains wouldn't pick,
dribbling dog stop scribbling god, your only good for sucking dick.

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Edit for quick expo's:

-in the shoutbox said that one of mah favorite rappers was jadakiss. He barley new who he was and asked to name a jadakiss track for him. lol
- He's a Topical Guy

Not even sure why i accepted this battle...because i really got nothing to SAY TO THIS FAG
cuz his CLAIMS ARE JUST WHACK ... when he 'says that he's a rapper' ... and can't name 1 JADAKISS TRACK??????////
plus sounding like the LAMEST OF CATS ... saying he's a only does TOPICALS AND SHIT
dirty fucker licking POPSICALS LIKE DICKS ... I'm a 'murder you' leave you in a HOSPITAL YOU BITCH//////
i got a 'Ton to diss' but i do this for 'fun and shit' comebackkid this LOSE IS CLEAR-MAN
so i'm a 'Bun a spliff' right before i 'son this KID' like a FOSTER PARENT////
i seen your posts, your the TYPE WITH SOME CURLS, looking for the RIGHT SET OF PEARLS
I MIGHT END YOUR WORLD, when i really 'Bust Come' like i did Last NIGHT WITH YOUR GIRL////
dude, didn't you see the posts ... as soon as i signed in and came BACK TO THE SITE???
I've IMPACTED IT RIGHT, your only 'bringing it down' ... everything you RAPPING IS LIGHT/////
I could waiste 3 bars, and still MURK THIS DWEEB CERTSAINLY its CURTAINS, PLEASE!
this 'Child is whack and' his whole 'Style is slacking' like those who got to WORK AT THREE/////
your just a JERK, A GEEK! ... and mah advice is you should man up and RESPECT YOUR SUPERIORS
but honestly 'compared to me?'...'topical or free' everything you TEXT, IS INFERIOR!/////



aigh i'm done!! vote fair! use the cats

Punches: Quix. Not only were his set ups better, and mutlies, but his execution was present. CBK, you werent bad, but your punches werent that great either. After quix's first bar he already had my attention more than any of yours did.
Personals: Quix. Other than 70+ battles from CBK, nothing else seemed about quix. Quix brang forth the topical comments, his poopie record, his text style.
flow: Ima say even. At one point, i had an easier time reading cbk's, but in the same token, i also realize since quix had the better rhyme scheme, itd be harder which he still pulled off, so it evened it out.
nampeplay/wordplay: this one is prolly my least favorite cat, cuz im not familiar with everybodys slang, or terminology. As for name flips, i really didnt see any. What i will say is the "legend" by cbk read extremely odd, felt forced. Didnt personally like it, and other than that i saw nothing else. Quix, your shits all over the place, and i dont know if im forcing wordplay onto you or if you're really trying lol. So ima leave a name off of this one, it wouldnt change anything anyhow.
Creativity: Quix, just overall better concepts, wording, everything.
Enjoyment: Quix, for all the reasons above
Overall: Quix, this one seriously feels redundant.

-- Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:12 am --

oh yeah, MVGT QUIX

Punches: quix
Personals: quix
flow: CBK
nampeplay/wordplay: Quix
Creativity: Quix
Enjoyment: quix
Overall- Quix


pretty much stomped on CBK better punches, rhymes everything

not really much else to say\

MVGT- Quix

aigh, 2-0 Quix

Punches: quix
Personals: quix
Flow: CBK
word/nameplay: quix
creativity: quix
enjoyment: quix

Quix laid down a better verse, CBK had flow but quix really came in ready to battle.

Vote: quix

just wanted to add this..

quix your flow has been choppy.. the multis seem forced man. if you read it outloud or in ur head...for example


i got a 'Ton to diss' but i do this for 'fun and shit' comebackkid this LOSE IS CLEAR-MAN
so i'm a 'Bun a spliff' right before i 'son this KID' like a FOSTER PARENT////


whether u meant to type "lose" or "loss"... "clear-man" and "parent" sound nothing alike... ur still killin cats but dont fall off on that bro.. just sayin

thanks fam ^


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