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We had the same dreams, both loved the same thing
it was insane we, were both on the same team

Easily executed enemies, and endured errors
Viciously viewed victories, then we began the mature era
Insane idols, became the lame idols
Lame idols all became a damn shame

its all a damn shame, we came to this
where you began to disrespect my name and shit

i tried to let the fuse die, but you replied
so ill use this guy to abuse his rhymes

and you can try to guess whose the guy
he claims to be deadly but i got the cure supply

you dissed me, im only followin rap traditions
i diss back, only cause you included your rap musician

welcome to the first stage of your demolition
my rhyme are bullets and i got unlimited ammunition

so in addition, i dont care, bring your rap magician
cause my 16 are candles and i can cure a curse from this dimension

people keep askin me why i didnt show him attention
i was busy he came after school like detention

if your lookin for a shark bite bitch, keep fishin
but we cant fit on a milk carton the thing hes missin

afraid that micz is in a new position
you mother fuckers let the best go, like new edition

if you would listen to the shit you was spittin
you would get it, you left yourself in a bruised condition

i beat AIDs, and Cancer and im still standin here wit trees
so what makes you think you're a threat, you just a mere disease

all of your friendships have been fake like pamelas so called boobs
i heard your chick take more headshots than a socom noob

not adressing tom, we've been cool since day one
subsists, and scott have been accepted like a gay son

no referring to typeo, even tho hes always hatin
demented mind is cool, he was just calmly waitin

ekoms and i have always been straight
same state, old crew so i can always try to relate

if i approached you niggas in person you'd pull a lil wayne and try kissin me
you rappers say you precise so stop half ass dissin me


black out from weed, i laugh as cowards bleed
indeed, i dont understand why u niggas lash out at me

asked for my opinions so i only agreed
pussies ill stop u niggas from wantin beef like mad cow diesease. one

lol. guess who

lol guess who im referring to? win a prize.

There was a few decent bars. The rest of them had rust written all over them like an old playground.

not adressing tom, we've been cool since day one
subsists, and scott have been accepted like a gay son

Hilarious line though ^.

I honestly don't know who this was directed at probably someone in my "why hip-hop is dead thread"

Add a link to something you left feedback on please. Its a new rule for everyone.

well im sorry but you're wrong but thanks for the feedback and yea im a lil rusty.. there was a few complex lines i want to see if anyone gets.

Precise?

lol

all of your friendships have been fake like pamelas so called boobs
i heard your chick take more headshots than a socom noob


^^lol.

lmao toms an idiot

you've gotten alot better kid, you just need a lil work structuring bars

a few good lines in this

http://illestlyrics.com/board/why-we-li ... ht=16+micz

thats a lot better. I'm not saying it was terrible
and his diss to goat ass was better then this diss

that wasn't better than this, it was structured a lil better thats it

you didn't even know who it was directed to actually read it instead of jew skimming (its not dissing me either lmao)

he used multis more fluently in this than he use to and actually got more creative with lines

I said precise the second time i read it. And I never said you?

its not to precise either, its pretty easy to figure out jewcakes

its the only member of the site that isn't mentioned by name in it thats been on the site since the freestyle box days (thats also not me)

lol killah is smart.. but im dissin more than one person...but you got the onei was dissing the most.