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Due in 48 hiurs - 6 bars


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g'luck Chess

ill stab-you-weakling,quit rap!its good if you DROP IT IDIOT,you're a Nerd and I CALL GEEKS HIDEOUS,cause this some sharp shit that'll "have-you-bleeding ALL WEEK!"...PERIOD

..so many sick lines,they so Bad-Its-Nuts,you're RIGHT,ITS PURE AND TOUGHER,You're not Man-Enough,I like your WIFES ENDURANCE BROTHER!you must be Mad-And-Stuff,plus ya fam couldn't "earn for your death" with your LIFE INSURANCE COVER!

You "Love Ma Style"...This is Cupid-In-Tux,biggest battle of your life,sorta like fist fights or a RIOT WITH SOME TENDERS,cause he's Stupid-Enough to write PILOT AS A GENDER,this Rookie-Is-Tough?How when even his crew is pussy,I mean they got a LION AS A MEMBER!

When I first checked ya alias out,man I SAW A PLUNDERED BITCH!You shouldn't take this personal,your weak..you can get the "Lion" ta ROAR SOME THUNDER HITS!cause this guys been here for three years and can't SCORE A HUNDRED WINS?

This aint fair to you, busting ma RAGE WITH ANGRY NOOBS,You seem like the type that's been to DATES WITH PLENTY DUDES,You "Raw" and shit,I expected you to be "mature" at the AGE OF TWENTY TWO

From this brawl,I should probably Gain Dozens Of Wins,Surely your fam has informed you of your wackness,take the advice your LAME COUSINS PERSIST!I mean how can this guy be real when even his NAME DOESNT EXIST?Lol...Ergh..

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Wut it do?



Lets goo,
so you a pestimistic kid? test the gimmiks quick, or get left SPRAYED IN YA HOUSE,DOG, STRAIGHT LAID ON YOUR COUCH, SHOT!
cuz your a fool, and have 'less respect here on this site' than cb.K IN THE SHOUTBOX////

so this gangsta loves to kick up dust, lets just call him a THUG TYPHOON, but SCRUB MIGHT DO
and yes, its true, i lost to 28 dope emcees here, But i've also beat 77 kids ... JUST LIKE YOU/////


ok lets get a lil more creative....


when newbies approach, i rudley invoke and forcast that HEADS ARE FLYING IN THE WIND
VETS ARE SIDING HIM TO WIN??? Nope!cuz the only time we seeing 'Chess work out' is when we're EXERCISING AT THE GYM////

i'm air this fool out, FOR-CLAIMNG HE'S WORTHY ... pfft he's too BASIC AND NERDY!
Stop the gun talk, cuz the truth is we only see 'Board walk at night' when on VACATIONS TO JERSEY//// lol

your just a FEIGN ON YOUR LAST JOURNY, listen, THIS MEANS YOUR A FAG, HEARD ME??
how you gonna win ... when in every battle your still 'coming up short' like the TEAMS FOR THE TAG TOURNY////



i litterally have no more time to write...gotta fly. G'luck man!!

Yowww...Gee,Nice Ish!!G'luck to you too man,Vote Up Plz!

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thanks .. good verse Chess


uppin for votes

ill stab-you-weakling,quit rap!its good if you DROP IT IDIOT,you're a Nerd and I CALL GEEKS HIDEOUS,cause this some sharp shit that'll "have-you-bleeding ALL WEEK!"...PERIOD
stretched the bar a bit multis where solid set up wasnt really there and punch wasnt feeling 2/5
..so many sick lines,they so Bad-Its-Nuts,you're RIGHT,ITS PURE AND TOUGHER,You're not Man-Enough,I like your WIFES ENDURANCE BROTHER!you must be Mad-And-Stuff,plus ya fam couldn't "earn for your death" with your LIFE INSURANCE COVER!
liked this bar better than the first but your bars are stretched its like each bar is 2 bars instead of 1 lost flow imo a little punch wasnt to good either on this one it was better than the first one but it really wasnt hard hitting for who you battled. 2/5
You "Love Ma Style"...This is Cupid-In-Tux,biggest battle of your life,sorta like fist fights or a RIOT WITH SOME TENDERS,cause he's Stupid-Enough to write PILOT AS A GENDER,this Rookie-Is-Tough?How when even his crew is pussy,I mean they got a LION AS A MEMBER!
again bar is mad stretched multis where good but bro who you dissing in this bar the only punch you threw was at lion nothing here to me pertains to this battle as a str8 punch more like a little filler on a diss and the multis where solid like i said but where random as hell 1/5
When I first checked ya alias out,man I SAW A PLUNDERED BITCH!You shouldn't take this personal,your weak..you can get the "Lion" ta ROAR SOME THUNDER HITS!cause this guys been here for three years and can't SCORE A HUNDRED WINS?
multis where a lil off on this bar plus not really throwing a diss here either yea sure he hasnt got a 100 wins but no one on this site does that have and some of the ppl have been here longer so not really seeing how thats a diss it would be different if you had 100 wins and did it in less time cuz then you could actually be dissing the fact he hasnt done it in longer time so this punch is a fail to me 1/5
This aint fair to you, busting ma RAGE WITH ANGRY NOOBS,You seem like the type that's been to DATES WITH PLENTY DUDES,You "Raw" and shit,I expected you to be "mature" at the AGE OF TWENTY TWO
again ok calling him gay hardcore there.... and you tried to be personal with the age shot but again where is the punch in it mature at 22??? thats not a punch bro at least not one to talk about... 1/5
From this brawl,I should probably Gain Dozens Of Wins,Surely your fam has informed you of your wackness,take the advice your LAME COUSINS PERSIST!I mean how can this guy be real when even his NAME DOESNT EXIST?Lol...Ergh..
you put alot of unneeded words in your bars that make them long and lose flow now and then again ur multis where kinda random and saying his name doesnt exist thats not a big punch i mean what are you getting at the fact quix isnt a word??? eminem isnt a true word... waka flaka arent real words... 1/5
8/30 man you had alot of stretched bars that lost flow to me you also added alot of pointless things your multis where decent but random like you where plugging things in to make them rhyme... punchs where your big downfall you had poor set ups for some punches and you didnt have any force to them at all you need to try and be more personal in a battle but be creative try and think of something unique cuz to him cuz saying not being mature at 22 theres alotta ppl like that so you arent really getting anything directed at him....

so you a pestimistic kid? test the gimmiks quick, or get left SPRAYED IN YA HOUSE,DOG, STRAIGHT LAID ON YOUR COUCH, SHOT!
cuz your a fool, and have 'less respect here on this site' than cb.K IN THE SHOUTBOX////
flow was solid multis good punch wasnt really that great 2/5
so this gangsta loves to kick up dust, lets just call him a THUG TYPHOON, but SCRUB MIGHT DO
and yes, its true, i lost to 28 dope emcees here, But i've also beat 77 kids ... JUST LIKE YOU/////
flow again was solid multis good punch wasnt really the best it could have been worded a little different to add more force to it 2/5
when newbies approach, i rudley invoke and forcast that HEADS ARE FLYING IN THE WIND
VETS ARE SIDING HIM TO WIN??? Nope!cuz the only time we seeing 'Chess work out' is when we're EXERCISING AT THE GYM////
flow was solid multis good and nice nameplay and punch 4/5
i'm air this fool out, FOR-CLAIMNG HE'S WORTHY ... pfft he's too BASIC AND NERDY!
Stop the gun talk, cuz the truth is we only see 'Board walk at night' when on VACATIONS TO JERSEY//// lol
favorite bar in the battle right here this one made me laugh a little bit good nameplay and punch 4/5
your just a FEIGN ON YOUR LAST JOURNY, listen, THIS MEANS YOUR A FAG, HEARD ME??
how you gonna win ... when in every battle your still 'coming up short' like the TEAMS FOR THE TAG TOURNY////
nice closer not the strongest bar but decent to be a closer.. 3/5
ok to even the bar count i gotta make quix outa 30 to since you had one less thatll be a 0/5 so your total to 15/30 always got good flow and multis and some good nameplay seen you come harder idk if you where playing to your competition or not but alround solid drop

my vote goes to quix

Punches: Quix... His punches hit harder... Chess came indirect and lite
Flow/multies:... Quix... alot of Chessboards were forced and some didnt work
Creativity:... Quix... he wasnt all that creative but most of the lines chess came with were a stretch...
Personals: i would say Quix again only because the stuff chess said wasnt really dissing quix just stating facts...

alright i think thats enough cats... overall Quix Took this because he came at Chess... while chess just stated facts about quix that didnt add up to punches or disses

Chess u have potential but you cant tap someone on the shoulder and expect a win... you need to throw punches make the reader say wwhhhoooaaa!!!! thats how you take W's my friend...

Ok thanx man

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Quix's last Three Bars Won This Battle...They were the haymakers that chessboards verse lacked..

Fair...Ko..Close it update

Thread closed and records updated.


Quix wins KO.