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Prepetual Force by Weapon Mouth
Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:24 am
by Mindscapes
Re: Prepetual Force by Weapon Mouth
Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:33 am
by Orfadox
This Was Sick...The Flow,Wordplay,Beat...Everything About It....Not Much In Terms Of Feedback But I Personally Felt I Could'nt Criticise This In Anyway
Re: Prepetual Force by Weapon Mouth
Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 1:44 pm
by Warplay aka Pearce
That second verse was SICK!
Re: Prepetual Force by Weapon Mouth
Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2011 4:24 pm
by Cyan
Like the horns in the beat - the part a couple lines before "Posieden" was a little rushed but your definitely coming with the abstract multi-syllable flow and for the most part it is very on point ....
This second verse has an interesting filter on it but I'd ease it back a bit ... EQ'ed almost to the point of harsh.
On my first listen I was focused on the "vibe" of the song ... it has a good bounce ... Some of the verses "bulldoze emotion" and multiples are slick ...
Second verse ... very similar to the first in content ... kinda comic bookish ... viseral but not really themed ... I'd like to see you two converge on a single concept and interegrate a hook ...
but you guys definitely compliment each other ... and this is a tight track.
Re: Prepetual Force by Weapon Mouth
Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2011 12:40 am
by Mindscapes
Thanks for the overall good feedback guys!