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I writ this a while back, but the site went down so I couldn't post it, anyways heres a written peice I did.

Kutlure: Anyone who tries to control my life, can go fuck themselves, anyone who wants to have my soul, can go fuck themselves....

People need to concentrate-on-there-own-lives,
before I go obliviate-on-there-home-wives,
I'm fed up with some people acting like they know shit,
I'm not your own little puppet your like a known culprit,
your in the wrong-doing, pussy, ya thongs-showing,
I'm on this song-flowing, just-me, with long-clothing,
I just bust people who loose my lust trust as I'm just,
lyrically inclinded, lyrically masterminded, spirtially minded,
but on a deadly spitting frenzy, I ent a friendly hitting emcee,
people like you will get turn to rust, straight up burn to dust,
me and your bitch is like a tag supreme in bed,
you and your snitch is like a fag team givin' head,
your motto is like Cash Rules Everything Around Me,
my motto is like Bust Fools Mainstreaming Around Me,
people use control to get to your soul, they can suck Usher,
and if they want to get more soul, they can fuck a sucker,
and if I ent got pure talent, then you must want more manhunt,
I'll make sure if we were to confront, your body will be back to front,

Don't let anyone control you, be true to yourself, fuck them hoes, and don't become a sell out in the rap game.

This was alright.

Seems like to tried to hard to make disses,
They felt really forced, and not well thought out.

people use control to get to your soul, they can suck Usher,
and if they want to get more soul, they can fuck a sucker,

Meh. WTF? Lol.

<3

oops i ment to put, "if people use control to get to your soul, then they can suck Usher,
and if they want to get more soul, they can fuck a sucker,

Kulture wrote:oops i ment to put, "if people use control to get to your soul, then they can suck Usher,
and if they want to get more soul, they can fuck a sucker,

Ahh, Ok. Makes more sense now!

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lol @ that explanation....its whatever....ahem...this was cool looks like you were trying too hard to come across as super lyrical with a tongue twister in each part of this....it was cool...but I dont think it really works so smoothly when you transition and your still going "Haters may hate but later they say you made it ur great" well u didnt say that but u get the jist of it lol

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Yeah I do try to write with super lyrics lol, theres nothing really to talk about, I'm always struggling to find a topic to talk about.