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Hardly Working

Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:43 pm
by QwarterZ
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Check the words and what they label as speech, as I strangle the beat
at a angle the feet, start to struggle and feel tangled as he...
moves like rectangles complete, boxing out these lame-o's and creeps
get cradled to sleep, as I move like the man thats fatal with leaves
grass stems and labeled as freak, a hero, and on that table is tea
move swiftly as my moods shifty, nod heads and continue to move with me
as my views quickly alter so do the thoughts I used to improve this feat.
now what you view is me, and can easily change with the groove with beats
but still I connect you to me, and son you no blocks for the u and v
if you look close to the u and v, you can see that you just envy
the swag is different, the crews and teams seem to see more boo's aplenty
prolly cuz they abuse the next scheme I could just use to defend each..
view Im presenting, y'all goofballs serving patties of the spatula
I move like a rhyming tarantula, as I dive into life divide the per capita
my sites on the canister, crack it open and keep your eyes on the banister
names come and go by the manager, fired for tryna steal the box I perametered
now that I'm a gambler, I switched flows up for the fun of bein' a janitor
cleanin' up these fools I can't stand up top, it's Alaska to Canada
you get the tip of the ice berg as I splice words into some nice verbs
break down like nice herbs as I get as high as christians on Christs words
I'm fillin' up my work all up in between the opening of a dimes purse
while you just fill your dime purse, collectin' calls up to find work
I'm fine tunin' this fine work, with fire, water, wind and this nice earth
now as I mix all I've heard, I'm waitin' to see if all the elements combined burst...


eternally, this world is burnin' me, because it may have never heard of me
and as absurd as that is, I figured that most of these motions won't work for me
considering my most worthy feat. is breakin' down the idea a nerd could see
but seemed like fitting poetry, so I wrote it down and left it to inertia....preach

Re: Hardly Working

Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:05 am
by Quix
Check the words and what they label as speech, as I strangle the beat
at a angle the feet, start to struggle and feel tangled as he...
moves like rectangles complete, boxing out these lame-o's and creeps
get cradled to sleep, as I move like the man thats fatal with leaves
grass stems and labeled as freak, a hero, and on that table is tea


liked this part the best.

Good read. Flow was on for the most part and content was nicely put together. Good beat selection as well. Good drop

Re: Hardly Working

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 6:16 am
by QwarterZ
nice lookin out bro

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Re: Hardly Working

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 6:56 am
by FatalX
Im definatly gon have to agree with Quix on this one...that was the cleanest....your follow through was aight and you had a couple decent lines that held my attention it was enjoyable....pretty solid

Re: Hardly Working

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 8:39 am
by AntiMaTTer
shits dope yo. wana hear you spit it so get to it

Re: Hardly Working

Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:55 pm
by QwarterZ
lol...alright bro....I have a few places to record but I want myself in top quality yaaaa diiiiiig

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