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Street lights flicker and flash time spent quicker than cash life elapses and forms gaps as I relapse and my chest collapses the worlds caving in on me like I'm my own enemy its me verses I the battle of my mind mentally ill it comes swiftly real like a thief in the night like the speed of light cuttin through visual sight ever so slight but positioned just right left me shut down lookin up from the ground knocked down by gravity but im fallin up my soul is liftin outta me I counter your reality With my dream mentality im quick to react with my mental reflex don't understand me I'm to complex and the mind over matter break the glass shatter reflect on the concept of internal conflict

I think its pretty sick. Was a little difficult to read at first 'cause of the layout, but it could definitely make a good fast rap and you got some good content going. Keep it up. And if you haven't dropped feed on anyone else's pieces after posting yours, you may wanna catch up on that now before someone attacks you for it. Just saying.