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Verse 1:
Bereaved and Grieved, bank account on fail/
Bitch blow my dough on weaves and fake applicator nails/
It’s awkward the way she put a stop to my music hustles/
When She pulled the condom off with her coochie muscles/
A nigga never wins with this raging drama/
With seven kids by eight different baby mamas/

Chorus:
Loving hoes like Al B. Sure, a nigga could never win/
That’s why it’s “Fuck child support” nigga, and get those rims/

Verse 2:
It’s true my kids got to eat three meals a day/
But that’s no excuse to garnish a nigga’s wage/
My sons and daughters ask for assistance with they living/
But I’d rather see my spinners when they stay spinning /

Chorus
Baby mama pussy smell like Albacore, coochie fishy enough to have fins/
That’s why it’s “Fuck Child support, nigga” and get those rims/



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I've got to admit, I'm becoming a fan of yours.

COOL STORY BRO.

You need to quit hating, unless you want to lose a battle.

Lulzus.

Naw dude, YOU need to quit hatin. I took about 30 minutes out of my day to leave extremely helpful feed on your wack ass Trayvon Martin rap, and you have the disrespect to come by and insult a written of mine that you probably couldn't even understand. I bet you missed the wordplay like "her kisses got me religious how she's speakin in tongues" and all the other shit, too.

And the idea of you beating MonuMental in a battle had me shakin my head. Given the differences between his skill level and yours, you're lucky the man even acknowledges that you exist on this site. He worked out all the writing problems you seem to be having back in kindergarten when public education taught us not to sound like a complete fucking idiot.

And hold up, I just read your rap and I had a serious question:

You said you had 7 different babies by 8 different baby mamas? So did one of your 8 mamas each take half the baby in her stomach, cuz if u had 8 baby mamas YOU GOTTA HAVE 8 DIFFERENT BABIES HOMIE! DID YOU PASS THE SECOND GRADE?

And I'm sorry, but nobody is gonna be feelin' your drops about skippin out on child support. FOR RIMS?! I'm a victim of childhood neglect and was raised with no parents cuz of fucking dirtbag scum like you.

You're a sad excuse for a human being and I would like to kindly invite you to kill your ignorant, ghetto ass self.

And get the fuck off this site. It's called ILLEST lyrics.

lmao!! damn...dudes got 5 posts and already getting smashed on.. prolly a record.

uh as for the raps go i thought this was funny:

It’s awkward the way she put a stop to my music hustles/
When She pulled the condom off with her coochie muscles/

some nice coochie imagery and it rhymed. rest was average rapping stuff
but w/e do ya thing. and if ya gona be active id suggest backing ya talk up
cuz thats how shit rolls here.