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It's Like Dudes Be Hatin-On-Me You Beef Wit One An Face-An-Army/
But You Fakes-Can't-Harm-Me I'll Leave Ya Facial A Razor-Party/
An Why You Raised The Hate-Up-On-Me, Is The Only Thing That's Way-Beyond-Me/
Cuz You Aint-By-Far, You're Like A King Battlin Me When I'm A Ace-Of-Cards/
Mad Cuz I Blazed-You-Hard, Even Micz Agreed Now He's Takin-His-Part/
In-The-Beef Like He's Harder-Then-Me 15, Like How Hard-Can-You-Be?/
You're A Scarf Split Apart-At-The-Seems, I'm Large With The Heart-Of-A-Beast/
I Do-What-I-Can I Don't Lose Cuz I'm Wack I Lose-To-Advance/
An Always Pay-My-Dues-In-Advance, It's Like When I Lose-I-Just-Glance/
At The Dude-That-Advanced To A Higher-Rank, Never Am I-Irate/
Look In They Eyes-Like-Great, Notepad Writein Ryhmes-All-Day/
Never Bitch-An-Complain I Spit-To-Remain At The Tip-Of-My-Game/
Lost My Head For A Minute-I-Aint, Gonna Deny-That-Fact/
I Even Tried To Apologise-To-Cats The Way I Implied-It's-Wack/
So This Is My Reply-To-That, Where I Really An Truely-Stand/
Just Don't Get It Twisted I'm Just Dooly-anne, Payin My Dues-Again/
An Mic Just Feels Influy-enced to Attemp To Try An Do-Me-In/
When He Can Consume-Me-Friend, Lost His Mind An Flew The Looney-Bin/
But As Far As Me Complex-Go, I've Squashed An Let-Go-Of-This-Beef/
So If There's A Grudge You Hold Against-Me, We Can Battle Again But Over A Beat!/

:::::Dooly-anne, Meaning Dootlin,Or Dootling:::::
:::::Influy-Enced, Meaning Influenced:::::
:::::Consume-Me-Friend, Friend Meaning Dick:::::

I Wrote This Cuz I'm Bored, It's Nothin Against Complex Cuz As Far As I Know We Squashed Shit, unless This Is Just Some IllestLyrics Beef Cuz We Got Along Fine In that MSN Convo lol But Word. Micz Get Eat A Dick Though lmao.

lol....impressive.

Well Mac's Livin Up 2 His Award Pretty Nicely So Far. Consistent Multis The Whole Way Thru And Stayed On Topic. Flow And Structure Was Nice. Are u Gnna Do This Audio? a Few More Verses And it Can Be a Solid Track.

Nah, Only Way I'm Gonna Do A Track Is When That Audio Anniversary Takes Place, Or If Complex Wants To Audio Battle Or What Ever. But This Particular Flow Or Situation, Nah Even Though I Wrote It To A Beat But Lol It's All Good. ::thanks for the feed though man::

rhyme scheme was good some of the bars were worded awkwardly though, it was lacking on disses being a diss verse but overall it wasn't bad

It Was A Decent Verse In My Opinion
Good Shit .. Most Of The Multis Hit Righ n Made
Sense In A Few Parts Ya Flow Sort Of Threw Me
Off To Where I Was Buggin It Was Only Maybe 2 Bars Though

Thanks For The Feed Back Folks. Addressing All killah, It Wasn't An Actual Diss Track, If So I Agree It Would Have Been Lacking In Punches, But If You've Seen My Battles I'm Consistent With Disses. But Thanks For The Feed Back Man.