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These Mics Are Not Literal

was born from a criminal, buy your life away with a visa
fuck dominos, i let papa johns deliver my pizza

claim my style is always similar, never changed it
but thats cause it leaves damage, eyes,face, and your brain splits

trust me and wait, today, you're lucky you ate
never trust an ugly, musty, wack fucker, you disgust me

physically couldnt touch me, mentally... couldnt bust me
lyrically, well..that shouldnt even be discussed see..

Your only amusin lames, abusin games, look what you've became
when "Micz" start making "dough" imma put dominos outta business and make him lose his name

you claimin you write sick, couldnt be nice with my shit
face it, when i read ur garbage, makes me wish i was blind bitch

"D"ipshit, dishonorable dumb,duck,dickface dumpin dirt, no donations

"O"nly odd one, obey no one older, not on special ocassions

"M"ake men masturbate, made ur mother molest you, then came ur mutation

"I"gnorant immigrant, im ur idol, intern , micz imitation

"N"igga nobody needs another nerd, no, not a fag nomination

"O"ops let domino meet his mother fuckin domination

calmly waited anxious and bravely, slayed him
only a baby?but i schooled u, old ass dude, ur crazy

jock me its wild, i was always a cocky ass child
im wack?look at ur 2nd bar nigga now u gonna copy my style?

since when was rappin suppose to be a comedy
a laugh here and there never harmed a g
but come-on-d, if u gonna joke, why not use a lilbit of honesty

time to pay the price of shame, you'll never see the price of fame
you're twice my age, but i "ate" you like 40 minus twice my name. bitch(8)

that was just a warnin shot for u, nothing too special just writing to let u see the talent....

Well ur 1st One Was Better. Or Lets Just Say The 1st 1 Was Less Wack Than This 1. Ok Use Of Alliteration, Seemed Jerky And Didn't Flow Like a Dream at All. Once Again The Nameplays Sucked. Cuz it's Like i Read This Whole Verse Before. And i Even Told u The Best Nameplay For Me. And...ill Type Somethin Up Quick. Have a Nice Day...Or..Until My Diss Comes Up Lol....

hen "Micz" start making "dough" imma put dominos outta business

dont fuckin tell me u heard that one before....

i Have, Just Not The Exact Same.

aw shut up ur full of shit, just get to writing..

Lol Don't Take a Tantrum Cuz ur 'Killer Line Omg Omg' Has Been Used Before, Just Without The Word 'Micz' in it. Fuckin Crybaby

lol sdfu and write something ill be waitin, please make this one a lil inspiring so i can have a reason to reply.

in a Bit Lol. im in No Hurry Since u Took a Day 2 Write That Trash

lol i didnt take a fuckin day i took 10-20 minutes c'mon now, that wouldnt even take u a day...

Yoo 16 Micz lol i Read Thru This it Was Good Man
i Like The Creativity Of This Piece Somethin New
Name Play Was Good Wit The Whole Pizza Place Things lol
Hott Line : Your only amusin lames, abusin games, look what you've became when "Micz" start making "dough" imma put dominos outta business and make him lose his name

Keep Doin U Homie `1

Yoo 16 Micz lol i Read Thru This it Was Good Man
i Like The Creativity Of This Piece Somethin New
Name Play Was Good Wit The Whole Pizza Place Things lol
Hott Line : Your only amusin lames, abusin games, look what you've became when "Micz" start making "dough" imma put dominos outta business and make him lose his name

Keep Doin U Homie `1

get off fucking dial-up, ^ ill edit my feedback here later

lol, is mics cheatin with his rep points? hes never fuckin here and hes got more than plex lmfao.

anyways, i donno, i think this was a tad decent in spots, but overall, its pretty obvious you wrote it in like 10 minits

ehh im actually here more than u, well the last month or two ive been here more than i use to be and how df would i be cheatin on my rep points...im just the most reputated dont be jealous...but seriously all killah gave me 460 points but even if he didnt id still have more than u so whats ur point...and...thanks for the feedback everyone i didnt really tyake this serious ill try to make up for the wack lyrics in a diff drop..