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I Wake & Bake to Paint Mornins,
Im Great when Brain Stormin,
I never Change its the Same Warmin,
I Blaze see the Flames Formin,
My Spirits jus Lazy it Aint Dormant,
Im fulla Rage ona Page & I Hate Forcin,
The Source of my Rhymes to Gorge out yuh Eyes,,
Give me my ring Im the Lord of the Lines,
Ive Sort of lost my Mind, Ill insert a Sword in yuh Spine,
And add Gore witta Nine, Forgin my Sign while Im Formin InSide,
Im Supportin my Life. Sportin the Strife,
Searchin for a Tour & a Mic,
Gettin Sore thru the Fight, Im so much More than jus Mike,
Im Ghost aka Spiritual Brutality wit Unlimited Morality,
Witta Criminals Mentality to Subliminize Humanity,
I agree wit Plex "Fuck Bush" and his Political Legalities,
Ima impeach him next wit my whits and a Lyrical Fatality.....


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AM I NOT WORTHY????

nobody said u were or werent did they?nope so chill sum ppl read shit and dont leave feed and sum do....so take it or leave it...ur structure was scrambled at times but overall it was ok could be better...seen sum pretty good multis which is good...the last bar was kinda clever i thought..overall id give it a 8/10 nice droppin...hope ta see more -1-

Yeah Man This Is A Good Piece, I've Seen Better Honestly. I Would Of Collab On This Piece With You But I Explain To You Earlier Why I Didn't. We'll Get Together An Drop Somethin Soon Though Man. Good Shit Though Over All, But You Definately Could Of Brought It Better.