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[align=center]Ooohh U Mad `cus i`m Stylin` On U ??..

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it`s Funny How Niggas, Wanna Be Like That Dude Rell ..//..
Tryna Copy, But it`s Like "Dumb Kids" They`ll "Soon Fail" ..//..
Stylin` On U Niggas is Sumptin` That i Happen to Do Well ..//..
No Beefin` Wit Me, `cus i Got Sumptin` That Bubble U ..//..
Tha`s Wat Tha Pump`ll Do, Bring ya Fam Some Trouble Too ..//..
They Like "Rell U Musta Got Letters `cus U Got W / Double U`s" ..//..
it`s Like They Wanna Get Clapped `cus i`m Random ..//..
Quick to Kill ya Dogs, & Hold ya Cats For Tha Ransom ..//..
Like "Reverse Condoms" & Smack U Wit Tha "Back Of Tha Magnum" ..//..
U God Damn Clones Gon` Learn, That Copyin` ain`t Stable ..//..
Take ya Chick, "C`mon ma` U Gotta Lame .. But i Can Upgrade U" ..//..
Swagga Jackas, Please i`ll Effin` Rip U Clones ..//..
Moms Won`t Be able to Get U Home,
Bitch, U Suck & U a "N.E.R.D" & as "For Rell / Pharrell" i ain`t Gotta "Present U Clones" ..

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Rappin About Guns Is Played Out Like Crazy. But This Is A Pretty Good Piece, I Only Saw Like One Or Two Lines Where You Fell Off I.M.O But Other Then The Gun Bullshit An Those One Or Two lines, Pretty Dope Man Even For A Short Piece. Keep Droppin.

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it`s Funny How Niggas, Wanna Be Like That Dude Rell ..//..
Tryna Copy, But it`s Like "Dumb Kids" They`ll "Soon Fail" ..//..

GoodLookin` Out Mac ..
Uppin` For Tha Feed ..

Good Shit
Fav Lines : Take ya Chick, "C`mon ma` U Gotta Lame .. But i Can Upgrade U" ..//..
Swagga Jackas, Please i`ll Effin` Rip U Clones ..//

Yah. Nice piece man.

U God Damn Clones Gon` Learn, That Copyin` ain`t Stable ..//..
Take ya Chick, "C`mon ma` U Gotta Lame .. But i Can Upgrade U" ..//..

That line was ILL. I really liked it. Ha

Quick to Kill ya Dogs, & Hold ya Cats For Tha Ransom ..//..
Like "Reverse Condoms" & Smack U Wit Tha "Back Of Tha Magnum

that was a sick line dude... but ill agree wit mac, speakin about guns in rap is a lil repulsive to the reader, guns arent to be talked about, it doesnt make you gangsta, not sayin that you think you are, and if you are then you are, but talkin about guns jus means that you have no real substance to write about, besides that the verse was well written and had a decent structure to it and it flowed well while i was readin it... big up kid keep doin yuh thing bro

GoodLookin` Out Everybody ..

Uppin` For Feed ..

dammnn pretty dope the beginning was a lil tacky but it picked up and ended dope as fuck, i liked the wvocab rhyming and rhyme scheme u always got some dope bars to write my nigga keep it up

fav lines:Tha`s Wat Tha Pump`ll Do, Bring ya Fam Some Trouble Too ..//..
They Like "Rell U Musta Got Letters `cus U Got W / Double U`s" ..//..

^^ .. GoodLookin` Out Fam Base ..
i See U Gettin` active again .. Lol