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Ill leave yuh Shakin like Tektonic Plates,
Cuz yall are jus Fakin like Electronic Dates,
Learn to be Timid cuz Ill Never reach my Vertical Limits,
Like the Marines my Reshiem will Merk from the Distance,
Get Up Close, choke to provoke then Cut Throats,
You Must Know, I Bust Loads of flows becuz, well its Jus Ghost,
So Be Easy, and Please Believe Me Im Decieving when I Release my Demons,
Im Acheiving the Reason of Meanin for Breathin behind Repeated acts of Treason,
I keep wit the Heart and the Hope, so your Marked thru the Scope,
Its not coke but I Spark up the Dope, when i show the Art in my Notes,
My mics cocked back and locked jack, im Ready for War,
So fuck you Petty Remorse, its Only Worth, Pennies for Sorts,
Your gettin stuck wit Mechettes & Swords,
Im Built Tough throwin rhymes Heavy as Fords,
I Lace the Hits wit thoughts of a Athiest,
Spittin Flames to Whits, when holdin mics wit Na-palm Fists,
As a Patriot Ill Make you Wish you could handle jussa 8th of It,
Usin Rage to Rip yuh Rib Cage to Pits so be carefull I Aim to Lift,
Spirits & Souls, so Fear it the Most when Ghost shows his Lyrics and Flows,
So evil I can make Mirrors Explode, my desire is fire so Im Searin you Hoes....

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Uppin for Feed!!!!

Nice Ghost .. Punchlines Were On Point
You Had Alot Of Multis .. Some i Donno Didnt Go
Togetha Dat Well .. But This Piece Was Good Ova All U Showed Potential in it Dats Always A Good
Thing .. Fav Lines : Spittin Flames to Whits, when holdin mics wit Na-palm Fists,
As a Patriot Ill Make you Wish you could handle jussa 8th of It,

"As a Patriot Ill Make you Wish you could handle jussa 8th of It,
Usin Rage to Rip yuh Rib Cage to Pits so be carefull I Aim to Lift"

i enjoyed the multis there.. overall it was a solid peice.. im not sure wat hazard was talking about..sometimes the way u write is similar to the way i write.. where u get to straight to the point and go onto the next.. short and simple..where other ppl would probably find it confusing by assuming it all should relate to eachother like a specific topic... oh btw i think the word is Destruction lol.. not sure if u intentionally mispelt it or wat.. just letting u know

All i Was Sayin was in some places ME personally
didnt undastand it otha people migh b able to its
my own opinion

naw, i meant it as like Diss-struction... but thanx for the feed,

still uppin