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Hazard Fuel Me i'll Go Rocket Speed Wit Boxin These
Profit Fees i Get Tha Roc n Cheese Copp From Me/
Cops Hunt Me Tha Jakes Always Hate Tryna Trace
Half My Cake Thru Taste is This Sugar Or Yay/
i'll Strip You Niggaz Down Like Hookers is Placed
Matics Bring Tragic Hooks in ya Face Jus Took N Replaced/
Ya Chest Plate Wit A "Led-Slate" Creds Late i'll Class U Out
im Cookin Trackz Crackin Jawz Like Glass in Mouth/
Packin Swimmers How Ya Breath Catchin Drought Spittin Barrell
Keep Sprayin Till U Around White Hearin Musik Like Christmas Carrolz/

Thas hott tho thas whassup

IDK dude theres somethin about the way you write and how you like, basically miss words in your rhymes, you may want to proof read your verse before postin it, cuz if everyone that reads your rhymes say they dont understand you then its prolly true, the lines i did understand fully were dope though, so jus keep practicin homie, and good shit on that battle.

Yeah Man ^^..I'm Telling You Hazard, Dumb Down Ya Verses Homie. Atleast That Way Everybody Understands It Other Then You. lol

Man lol im Not Gunna Drop No mo Fuck it

^^ .. U Betta Not Give Up yo` ..
Keep Doin` U ..
Man U`ll Get Better ..