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Ain't Dropped For a While, i Got Some Writers Block So This Was Really 2 Refresh Myself

Warmin Up With Creative Killin...

it's Like ur Steppin On a Rabbit's Foot, Cuz u Guys Are Pressin-ur-Luck ..||
im a Professional-Yup, u Ain't Testin-Me-Punk u Can Take a Rest-in-The-Trunk ..||
This Ain't a Gangsta Rap i Won't-Shoot-You, Fuck The Wessons-n-Pumps ..||
i'm Just Teachin-a-Lesson, Keepin-u-Guessin To When i Severe-ur-Lungs ..||
While They're Still-in-u And Slit ur Throat So Fast ur Blood is Spillin-Blue ..||
Stick a Quill-in-You, Cuz ur So Fuckin Wack at Rappin The Pen is Killin-YOU ..||

Mettas?...

So Steer-Me-Clear And Just Lock-The Door, Like ur Wheelin Down Compton's-Roads ..||
Not Even-Beavers Could Block-This-Flow, Domino's Always Can 'Drop-The-Dough'..||
These Rappers Ain't 'Tight' Like a Fat-Man's-Belt-Loose..||
And Couldn't Make a Wordplay With Alphabet-Soup ..||
Do Drop it, While ur at it, Let The Pen-Fall-With-it ..||
Cuz The Only Bars You'd Ever Ride Are Metal-Rivets ..||

And Some...

i Send Opposers Reeling-With-2-Fists While Screaming-ur-Useless ..||
'ill Rappers' Talkin Like They're The Best, Well ur Still Needing-2-Prove-This ..||
i See-Past These Weak-Bastards Thinkin Anyone's Feelin-Their-Bullshit ..||
Who u Foolin? Amusing They Still Think They're Good When They're Losin ..||
Spittin The Same-Old-Shit, And i Could Kill u But ill Save-All-Spits ..||
Cuz What's The Point Of 'Takin ur Life' When it Ain't-Worth-Shit ..||

http://illestlyrics.com/board/my-stance ... t3223.html <--Linky

Some Of Tha Multies Were Forced to Me ..
Tha Flow Was a Lil Choppy ..
U Was a Lil Rusty On This Piece ..
BUT .. U Still Managed to Make it Nice ..
Tha Ceativity Was Tha Best Part ..
IMO .. `cus Tha`s One Of Mah Favorite Cats ..

I've Seen A Lot Better From You, So Clearly You've Had Writers Block. Some Lines Was Played Out Like That "Slit ur Throat So Fast ur Blood is Spillin-Blue" Multies Was Alright, I Didn't See Many Forced Ones imo, Over All Though It Was Nice, You Definately Can Do A Lot Better Though. Writers Block Is A Bitch Though So I Feel You. Keep Droppin Though Homie.

Write some verses without multies im sure thatll freshen you up.

explain to me why ur on my nuts...with this title seriously, first mac, then hazard, then ghost, now domaho..eh ill probably read it a lil later..

Mine Was A Joke So Be Eazi ... Nice Domino ..
Multis Was Good Metaphors .. it Was Creative
Keep Droppin... i Liked it Personally

Yah, Writer's Block Really Does Suck Lol. Sometimes u Get That Feelin u Can Write For Days...Sometimes u Don't Lol. Thanks For The Feed Ppl And Rust is Currently Being Shook Off. Lol