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Yup, This is Just Somethin i Wrote When i Was Mad at Just a Load Of Shit Buildin Up And Havin Writer's Block. Not My Best, it's Really The Written 2 Get The Pendulum Movin Cuz im Real Rusty.. So Haha

Sometimes The Sickness-n-Stress Builds With Quickness-n-Presses ..||
Down On Me, im Sick-With-Regrets That ill Just Stick-With-Till-Death ..||
i Felt Like Quittin-instead i Chose To Stick-With-The-Pen ..||
With a Pencil ill Rip On The Paper Till There's Chippings-Of-Led ..||
im Not Obsessed, But Possessed-is-Right, i Let The Stress-ignite ..||
Then Sit-And-Write My Problems Down Thru The Day And Then in-The-Night ..||
im Destined-To-Fight, Always Testing-My-Might When i Get-On-The-Mic ..||
Listen Over im Like 'it's Not The Best-i-Can-Write' ..||
a Whole Lot in-Me-To-Let-Loose But im Quick-To-Forget-Too ..||
Tellin Myself 'it's Time To Rip it Now, They'll Be Quick-To-Forget-You' ..||
Suppose im Like Atlas, But it's Only My World-On-My-Shoulders ..||
Feelin Weak in The Morning The Days Coming-Like-Boulders ..||
Shit it Feels Like Everything i Touch is Turning-To-Stone-When ..||
Writer's Block Prevents Me From an Outlet in The Words-That-i-Flow-With ..||
But i'm Lettin-it-All-Out, The Pressure-Should-Fall-Now, ill Never-Be-Locked-Down ..||
When i Kno This illness inside Me Wants To Kill Me But Not-Now ..||
i Try To Hide-it Like im Fine-But Over Time-it Will Shine-And ..||
Even Myself i Donno When The Fuckin Time it Will Strike-Man ..||
Last Year i Lost a Lot And Gained-Nothin, The Same-Fuckin Shit This-Year ..||
i Just Sit-Here And Wait For a Quick-Tear But Naa.. ill Soon Be Fit-Hear ..||
Emcee's Try To Diss-Me, ill Quickly Rip-These With Shit-Frees ..||
That Spew Out My Ass Cuz Thats All They Need For it Bitch-Please ..||
16 Micz Remains On My Nuts, Some1 Tell Me Who The Fuck-This-Boy-is ..||
Cuz i Couldn't 'Feel ur Shit' if My Head Was in ur Unflushed-Toilet ..||
im Just Shakin Off The Rust Now, Gettin The Pendulum-Movin ..||
Soon ill Be Writin Again And Killin Contenders-in-Choosin ..||


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a Whole Lot in-Me-To-Let-Loose But im Quick-To-Forget-Too ..||
Tellin Myself 'it's Time To Rip it Now, They'll Be Quick-To-Forget-You' ..||

one my fav bars outta that...nice concept..and ye i get writers block sumtimes too i go fuck..lol but solid piece..nice multis as always..keep droppin..dunno if theres a part 2 or whatever but nice -1-

Not Bad, You Definately Fell Off Towards The End, The Beginning Was Dope Man. But Writers Block Is A Bitch, And When I Have Writers Block I Just Do Multies And Keep Rhyming And Rhyming And Rhyming Untill I Shake Loose Where I Can Flow Again. But Word That's Give Advice From The Mac Meister, Recognize Home Slice. lol But Good Drop Man.

Fav Line(s):
Felt Like Quittin-instead i Chose To Stick-With-The-Pen ..||
With a Pencil ill Rip On The Paper Till There's Chippings-Of-Led ..||

im Destined-To-Fight, Always Testing-My-Might When i Get-On-The-Mic ..||
Listen Over im Like 'it's Not The Best-i-Can-Write' ..||

Ty For The Feed Guys. And Yup This Post Signalled Me Temporarily Quitting From Rapping Altogether. Donno When ill Start Again But You'll Kno Lol

it Was Strait Yo U Had Multis Flowin in it ..
i Agree Wit Mac u Fell Off a Lil At Da End Dats Bou it..

this was pretty raw man...i liked it....


i Felt Like Quittin-instead i Chose To Stick-With-The-Pen ..||
With a Pencil ill Rip On The Paper Till There's Chippings-Of-Led ..||

that right there was tight...stay up...do wat u do

"Shit it Feels Like Everything i Touch is Turning-To-Stone-When ..||
Writer's Block Prevents Me From an Outlet in The Words-That-i-Flow-With ..||
But i'm Lettin-it-All-Out, The Pressure-Should-Fall-Now, ill Never-Be-Locked-Down ..||
When i Kno This illness inside Me Wants To Kill Me But Not-Now ..|| "

Very complex. I like it. The end was a little wtf, but a good read overall.

I highly recommend you don't quit for a while though. Think you have writers block now. Wait until you take a long break.

beginning was off the hook, and i agree end fell off for a bit, but thats aight. shit was overall a nice drop, sick multis..

fav lines...

im Destined-To-Fight, Always Testing-My-Might When i Get-On-The-Mic ..||
Listen Over im Like 'it's Not The Best-i-Can-Write' ..||
a Whole Lot in-Me-To-Let-Loose But im Quick-To-Forget-Too ..||
Tellin Myself 'it's Time To Rip it Now, They'll Be Quick-To-Forget-You' ..||

this shows a real personable side, givin a real window to your thoughts while still being bragadocios, lol great mix right there.

good drop dunny...

this right here was fire until the end, and the end wasnt that bad either, the multies were sick wit it and the vocab was off the chains.... keep at it man.

FuLL TILT

Reason im Taking a Break - i've Taken a Bad Bump 2 The Head Which Makes Thinking Hurt And Fainting 2 Easy, Sickness Etc. im Probably Working in Sweden Soon And After That im Goin On Vacation. So Yah i Wont Be Writing an Awful Lot...But ill Be Doin it..And Practicin So Yeahhhh Lol. Ty For Rhe Feed Guys, Peace