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Posted: **Wed Jan 18, 2006 9:11 pm**

dissapear to reappear stalkin ya frame//
dissin peers den steer a queer talkin in flames//
listen hear ur fearin beers walkin wit shame//
pistons cheer im clearin spears squawkin for blame//
stop da game ima tame dis dame n explain da rain//
inner vein creatin pain thru my hitler like reign//
killin ya mayne like 50 cent feelin da bane//
willin ta train soldiers to get at ya brain//

(1 month ago)

~~~Flipped in reverse and backwards~~~

(today)

im always here so keep ur syringes in hand//
spirals feared deep insicions by strand//
no vaccine leavin u dead like a crack scene//
splat spleen mad gas like a black bean//
is dat mean? hunched over wit my slack lean//
pause yet inter-act-ing//
paws wit splinter-tacked-meat//
my jaws r winter cracked seats//
flipped the switch n get ripped n stiched//
jipped a bitch got her tripped den ditched//
lift ya wrists before i shift da mist//
stick to mits cuz bitch ya pisst//
i resist a-rrest den persist ta-pest//
physi-cist da best per-cyst i rest//

comments would b nice

Posted: **Wed Jan 18, 2006 9:40 pm**

non stop rhyming, i felt it, really short, but just kinda flowed along.

stop da game ima tame dis dame n explain da rain//
inner vein creatin pain thru my hitler like reign//

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Posted: **Thu Jan 19, 2006 10:30 am**

I don't get the topic really, nothign was reversed lol

Same comment as i left on your other verse, your rhyme schemes good but you force alot of multis to make it look good

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