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[{ Drunken Jesus }]

i drop quality like kweli probably the most modern of prophecies
are spawned from my mockeries of god with raw theology
i embark on a odyssey with a heart dark armed to part the seas
i'm smart with hatred, a god to thieves reincarnation of don juan domarco
once my palms starts ya hearts froze i bomb on the narks, flows
shattering spines of the cowards with unmatchable lines my power
will climb an undefiable tower a pedestal nothing is level to
simply put i'm fucking incredible bring ya best vet that reps ya crew
and see his breaths left decreased his head'll rest between
his knees kissing his ass goodbye too embarrassed to stand next to you
i unleash havoc to black the skies so any attempts at testing dude
aren't expected to end with a better mood you'll have to wrestle tubes
from your ventricles in the ER with medics attempting to rescue you
then i'll show up at the hospital with al quada watching the building
blow up all on top of you so just learn what to do with the knowledge kid,
cause homie i don't make death threats i make funeral promises

[{ Ghost aka Spiritual Brutality }]

Its seems Ima Dream a Hope in the DarkNess,
my saliva's Gaso-Line and Ghost is the Spark Bitch,
Ignite up the Sheets thru Flows is my Part Kid,
My Pen leaks Inks Ex-Plodin on Targets//
Either Smoke or Fire, I Hope to Light Up,
And when Im focused Ghosts a Writer,
My inner Souls Desire, says never to give up & Don't Retire,
Till you're a savior of the game like Old Messiahs//
Ive Chosen my Path, Re-Opened my Raps,
Now Im choking throats thru Emotions of Wrath,
Im Cold in Attack, Im a soldier keeping Sober InFact,
So I can remember all the golden Moments that Passed//
I feel like I always Gotta Prove, that Im notta Prodigal,
Instead a Mythological prodigy who conquers any Obstacle placed In his Opticals//

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Shit. Ghost you were pretty raw. The multis came off nicely. Nothing seemed forced. A few lines weren't that great though.
Still you were nice enough to make this a dope collab.

Drunken Jesus took it up a level or two though. His first 6 bars were fire. With a crazy rhyme scheme that flowed off the tongue like nothing. Don't forget the content. Which was intellectually ill. Every bar went together. Very nice.

Drunken Jesus dropped a great verse. Ghost dropped a pretty good verse. Thats what I make from it.

9.0 for a collab though

thanx Plex

Uppin 4 Feed

Word. DJ's Verse Was Real Complex. Ghost Definitely Had No Forced Multis Or Shit. Both Of Ya Made Dope as Hell Use Of Vocab And inner Rhymes So it Never Got Borin at Parts. Some Lines Were Better Than Others Of Course But Overall it Was ill. Peace

both were good not one part was whack!

Damn, That Was Hot Folks. Best Verse I Saw From All Killah As Well. Ghost Definately Held His Own In This Collaboration. Definately Off The Hook Material Folks Good Shit.

Agreed With Plex
9.0

All KIllah???

Yeah, Drunken Jesus.

didnt know he was all killah....lol

Anyways thanx for the feed.

ghost didnt do too bad either!

good stuff. ive only read of couple of killahs things, and this was in the top.

killah:
shattering spines of the cowards with unmatchable lines my power
will climb an undefiable tower a pedestal nothing is level to
simply put i'm fucking incredible bring ya best vet that reps ya crew
and see his breaths left decreased his head'll rest between
his knees kissing his ass goodbye too embarrassed to stand next to you

^some of my favorites. all of it was ill though. good amount of multis, good vocab, overall solid verse.

ghost:
Ive Chosen my Path, Re-Opened my Raps,
Now Im choking throats thru Emotions of Wrath,
Im Cold in Attack, Im a soldier keeping Sober InFact,
So I can remember all the golden Moments that Passed//

^my favorites...honestly, ive seen you come much harder but this was still pretty dope. good amount of multis, just a couple lines were up to your standards. but still, an overall solid verse.


nice drop fellas.

good looking out to all that dropped feedback on this, i'll return the favor in a little bit, nice verse ghost

this was a pretty solid collab...drunken shined on this the most i think.... with...


i unleash havoc to black the skies so any attempts at testing dude
aren't expected to end with a better mood you'll have to wrestle tubes
from your ventricles in the ER with medics attempting to rescue you
then i'll show up at the hospital with al quada watching the building
blow up all on top of you so just learn what to do with the knowledge kid,
cause homie i don't make death threats i make funeral promises


dat shit was pretty dope..haha...ghosts verse was good but nothing too great to exactly show...but both keep it up..i look forward to more

i enjoyed killah's verse more .. especially the the first couple bars.. i think ghost could've done a lil better but it was still good, as a collab it was great

yeah i was arguin wit my girl and battlin writers block at the same time......

not makin excuses or anything but you try writin while doin THAT!!! lmao

thanx for the feed back its appreciated...

UppiN