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in the mourning of emcees that is


Its the prospect of greatness that makes you insane
so i was born grate, the wordplay is medal-in my brain
i bring it first rate like johnny depp peddling cocaine
never lived a day without arraign like michael jackson
Dp the psycho faction, the cruise-in to win
we can own a-diction like whitney houston
we are never losing so dont wait, like rosie o donnells fat
plus we hit back harder then nicole richie without makeup
ill put that fuck mac in time capulse like war paraphenelia
we never will feel ya, so keep moving bricks like realtors
i stay real with ya, cuz i really do judge like judy
its a-parent you disapprove me, cuz i shine like rubies
nobody will ever make it thru me like a tsunami
get cut like salami you cant calm-me if you were Carl Marx
my philosphies are to complex like da vincis arts
when i rap you label me smart like the candy
i use to be tom but now i dont moniker like brandy
i thought id honor ya, cuz i roll like queen latifahs belly
im still the same uglier then regis with or without kelly
you cant excel me anymore like a governor chip
plus i dont slip like hazard, you egotistical bastard
thats it, actually fuck it, i burn hazard like plastic
so start shit, watch me flip like gymnastic contests
im also heartless, see how sarcastic complex is
im the hardest artist, lets say my style is viagra
i stay vial like chemistry, u cant stop my anger
u can try-ill against me, but i leave no-bodies
when i eat you alive, my mind state is godly
i think people must die, this isnt just a hobby
ur stupid to call me out like a death person
youll be left hurting cuz like a globe i can grab the world
battling me ur flirting with death like hazards girl (ur dead haz)
ill give the bitch a twirl, i give a pearl like harbor
hazards a faggot he will go down like a marder
then we will see if anyone has-heard of a murder
i got an ill will, i ll put my guts in your name
thats enough of this lame, i give brain like hiltons
just call me Scottish the way I kilt-him

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If you need any explanations just ask

Oooooohhh Some Powerful Hits in This Lil Piece ..
Lol .. Goin` at Some Heads i See ..
i Got Cha Back Though ..
Nice Piece ..
U Nicely Used Mah Favorite Cat ..
Lol .. That Wordplay !!!! ..
Yeah This Was a Good Read ..

This Part Flowed Together So Damn Good To Me :

ur stupid to call me out like a death person
youll be left hurting cuz like a globe i can grab the world
battling me ur flirting with death like hazards girl (ur dead haz)

seriously do you have to suck dick
to get feedback around here

Lately It Seems That Way, Me An Rell Was Just Talking About That Earlier As A Matter Of Fact.

Serious Though Man, Why Every Script You Drop Got My Name In It?

Seriously man because every thread we beef in. Why not my writtens as well?

My Bad Man, I'll Squash It.

This shit was tight plex, nice wordplay and metas...
dope peice keep dropiin homie!!!!

lol pretty nice, u still gotta work on the entertainin part, the disses were ok i liked it tho overall....


you used wayyyyyyyyyyyyy too much similes in this piece tho it got annoying and i didnt like the flow at all, idk if it was the way i read it or what, but it seemed slow and boring...but anyway i like that a-dictions line as well as the has-heard wordplay and the thing about his girl..keep it up

p.s its not really suckin dick that gets u feed u gotta leave alotta feed....

I leave at least 2 feedbacks a day. Jesus christ. Lol

My feedback always far outweights, the feedback I get. Oh well.

Now I got enough responses. So I'll stop ranting.

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Micz. I don't know about slow n boring.

It didn't have the best flow though.

The basic reasoning behind that is.
I was writing an obscure style. It was just
a morning freestyle with a lot of wordplay for fun.

As for the boring part. I know everything I drop
isn't boring. You don't need to mention me having
to become more interesting every thread.

You could just say. It wasn't very interesting. Which
in reality it wasn't because it was simply a "fuck it rap".
That had some decent wordplay & punches.
It should have been worth a laugh or two as well.

This is my final rant. Lol.