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2 verses

Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2006 2:30 pm
by precise
lol, i only got like three recorded songs, this is one of em, tell me watcha think, any tips or comments are appreciated. peace

click here

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 9:19 am
by precise
does no one reply in the audio threads?

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 10:06 am
by Ambiguous Realm
most of us have no speakers lol.. im just too lazy to "click there" and i probably already heard it

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 11:53 am
by complexity
i will listen soon.

Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 7:50 am
by complexity
Well, personally i think a steady voice, is what you need to work on the most. It was a really fast flow, but i caught some really nice lyrics. And plenty of multi's. And you did a pretty good job staying on the beat. I just think your voice goes up and down a litlte bit, and changes, which does throw off the flow.

But it was pretty good to listen to. Keep up

Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 8:02 am
by precise
thanks for the feed, i dunno i always try to change the pitch of my voice alot so that its not hum drum, but yea ill work on it thanks.

Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 8:07 am
by complexity
yah i know what you mean

Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2006 2:53 am
by overkill
You got ballz kid, keep praticing and you will get it. All It takes is time and practice.

Posted: Thu Mar 09, 2006 4:46 pm
by Viral
yea dat shits old man...lol u gotta def. got a new track goin.....dat way u can rip it up vocally......oh n fuckin finish dat beat already u lazy fuck so we can collab on it already!!..lol