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[align=center].. Address Tha Hatas Rell ..
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Hatas Hate, & Then Wanna Come at Me, Like They Can Rip Hova ..//..
U Faggots Mad `cus U Pack "Sloppy Bars" Like U Can`t "Get Sober" ..//..
Fuck U Lames, it`s Not a "Fuckin` Game" Niggas if This Was "Strip Poker" ..//..
11-0, U Punks Still Tryna Build ya Bridge, & Mah Record is Wat U Can`t Get Over ..//..
Great in Tha Raps, ain`t Bein` Cocky, i`m Juss Known to Be Statin` Tha Facts ..//..
When i First Started, i Wanted to Give Up `cus Everybody Sayin` i`m Wack ..//..
But Now i`m Put On Tha Barstool, to Be One Of Tha Greatest in Rap ..//..
i`m Second Guessin` Talent, When i Drop, i Don`t Even Wanna Play it Back ..//..
i Wish i Could Take it Back, if i "Tuck away Shady" i Still Couldn`t Make an "Em Pack/ Impact" ..//..
This Whole Rappin` Thing, ain`t Wat i Dreamed, it Was Juss a Hobby to Him ..//..
all This Drama, about "Whitney" `cus i`m "Crack" Wit No "Bobby To Them" ..//..
Pressure, if i Was to Juss Quit This Rap Shit, it`ll Juss Be a Less Body to Them ..//..
i Use to Mobb Deep Wit Timbz, Now it`s ice Creams & Nice Vans i Rock ..//..
Fuckin` Lames, Lol They Tried to Say i Was White `cus The Vans i Rock ..//..
NOW !!.. i`ma Juss Put Tha "Arms in Tha air" Like Fuck Tha "Hands i Cocked" ..//..
`cus We-Know, i Get "So Sick" Like "Ne-Yo", Hold Tha "Heavy Metal" Like "Bands i Rock" ..//..
Look at all Tha Grams i Chopped, Broke it Down into Nikes & Tha Bapes ..//..
Not in "Cali" But They Gon` Learn it`s a "High Fee / Hyphy" to Be Fake ..//..
Niggas Wanna Be Like Me, & Juss Hate, i Juss Wanna Start Wildin` On U ..//..
it`s Like i`m "Throwin` Milk On ya Clothes" Tha Way Tha "Cal is On U" ..//..
Now Everybody Know i Got "Gear" But Mah Flow alone is Enuff to Start Stylin` On U ..//..
U Mild & Some Luke, U Runnin` Thru Hell Wit a Wet Thin Cap ..//..
U Fags Juss Needa Get Back, U Bringin` More Drama Than Fat Fucks On Spin Chat ..//..
Either Love Me Or Leave Me alone Tha Great Hova Said ..//..
Keep Bringin` Up Tha Past U Needa Learn That When Beef is Over, DEAD !! ..//..
Doesn`t Matter if U Shaz Or Dawna Rell, `cus Nigga U Tha Hazard ..//..
Niggas Wanna Talk Shit & "Throw Dirt On Me" Like "Rumor Has Heard" ..//..
Tha Biggest Bitch Of Them all Tried to Get Wit Me On a Personal Tip ..//..
i Was Like Nahh i Don`t Wanna Be Wit U, & U Hurtin` Mah Script ..//..
That Wasn`t Tha Route For Me, & This Wide Load Was Swervin` Mah Whip ..//..
Once i Heard That This Bitch, Was Tryna Say That i Was a Worthless & a Chick ..//..
i Wanted to Reach Through Tha Screen & Start Murderin` Shit ..//..
Wow !! .. Doesn`t Matter, Them Fake Personals Won`t Throw Me Off Tha Throne ..//..
Why Don`t U Be Tha Big Man, U Come Try & Throw Me Off Tha Throne ..//..
Yeah, `cus ya Flow is Off U Clones, & it`s Nothin` `cus i`m Here ..//..
U Can Lie Here .. Hopin` & Prayin` That in This Battle Shit Someone Will Make Me Die Queer ..//..
U Niggas Think U Know about Rell But U Have No idea ..//..
How it Juss Sets in His Mind to Put On Flows, Good On Flows ..//..
Damn, it`s Juss So Lonely at Tha Top & Tha Hood all Knows ..//..
This is Tha "Fiasco a dress / address" Like it`s a "Disgrace To Put On Clothes" ..//..[/align]

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Question is Dat Towardz Me?

it isn`t Towards U ..
i Said "i ain`t Shaz Or Dawna But Rell U Tha Hazard" ..
How is That Towards U ??..

*Gets Off His Dragon And Uses its Firebreath 2 Light a Cig*

i Liked it, Tons Of Quoatable Lines. Wordplay And Multis Were On Q. Flow Was iffy at Some Parts But Overall it Was Hot.

Not in "Cali" But They Gon` Learn it`s a "High Fee / Hyphy" to Be Fake ..//.. <--Fav Line

`cus We-Know, i Get "So Sick" Like "Ne-Yo", Hold Tha "Heavy Metal" Like "Bands i Rock" ..//.. The So Sick Neyo Part is a Bit Played. Thats All i Can Really Question About it.... So Apart From That. Dope as Hell Drop. Keep it Up

^^ .. i Woulda Thought U Woulda Felt That Eminem Worplay Tha Most ..
Lol ..
But GoodLookin` Out For Tha Feedback ..

Jus Askin Cuz i Wuz Gunna Leave it Feed Anywayz
Aiiight Heas Whadd i Think Bout Dis Piece it Was
Aiight I've Seen U Come Harda in Da Wordplay
Cat .. U Had Multis Yea ... N it All Flowed Togetha
Strait ... Lookz Like U Got Some Shi Off ya Chest

But i Did Lyke Some Linez in hea Dat Stuck Out
Lyke ....

" all This Drama, about "Whitney" `cus i`m "Crack" Wit No "Bobby To Them" ..//..
Pressure, if i Was to Juss Quit This Rap Shit, it`ll Juss Be a Less Body to Them ..//"

Keep Droppin

"11-0, U Punks Still Tryna Build ya Bridge, & Mah Record is Wat U Can`t Get Over ..//..
Great in Tha Raps, ain`t Bein` Cocky, i`m Juss Known to Be Statin` Tha Facts ..//..
When i First Started, i Wanted to Give Up `cus Everybody Sayin` i`m Wack ..//..
But Now i`m Put On Tha Barstool, to Be One Of Tha Greatest in Rap ..//.. "

"NOW !!.. i`ma Juss Put Tha "Arms in Tha air" Like Fuck Tha "Hands i Cocked" ..//..
`cus We-Know, i Get "So Sick" Like "Ne-Yo", Hold Tha "Heavy Metal" Like "Bands i Rock" ..//"

"Once i Heard That This Bitch, Was Tryna Say That i Was a Worthless & a Chick ..//..
i Wanted to Reach Through Tha Screen & Start Murderin` Shit ..//.. "

them were my favorite lines, a few more stood out

Overall was a solid piece. Had a few lines I wasn't feeling that much but the good lines by far outweighed them. Good shit..

Looking forward to the next collab ;x

GoodLookin` Out Everybody For Tha Feedback ..
it Was Basically Gettin` Shit Off Mah Chest ..

Uppin` ..

Niggas Wanna Be Like Me, & Juss Hate, i Juss Wanna Start Wildin` On U ..//..
it`s Like i`m "Throwin` Milk On ya Clothes" Tha Way Tha "Cal is On U" ..//..
fav line

pretty nice drop i liked the scheme and topic, quick guesses as to who u dissin

drunken jesus
typeo
domino

just guessin but nice drop man i liked the wordplay had a bit of humor too, i forgot which line but keep it up

overall:8/10

Nah i`m Not Dissin` Nobody ..
But This One Fat Gurl ..
Tha`s it Though ..
Gettin` Shit Off Mah Chest about Things ..
Sooo GoodLookin` Out ..