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i'm Back Like Spinal Bones With Tha Gat Have ya Eyes Erode
Wrapped Around Da Nec Like Ties Fa Show Lef Inside a Hole/
i'll Gripp Tha Tool Like im At a Construction Site...Who im Slayin
Bulletz Like Sex Have ya Mind "Fuckin Right" All Desinagratin/
U Can Get Shotz If U Sober Cus i Wont Take No Bull Like Doser
i'll Start To Pull N Ova Dose Ya Till U Lookin Like a Rainbow/
Drippin Yellow Green Red Blue Like Dey Was Food Stainz Yo
Shove a Speaka Down ya Throat U Eva Felt Pain Yo???/
Raise Da Bass Till U Cuttin inside Like u Swallowed Razor Bladez
Picked Ya Body Apart Authorities Got No Teeth Ta Save Ya Age/
Once itz Piercin Thru ya Nose Dat "Gauge Will Face" Dat Brain
Like Tha Pinky Show.. Pull ya Panties Up Lookin Like a Sissy Ho/
Double Price On a Cheeseburga Only Time U'll Ripp Me So ...
Get Ya Shit Up Like Pointin To Tha Clouds..im God Kick in ya Asshole/
Have Ya Anal Area Thinkin Out Loud (SPLAT SPLAT) Scratch Dat...
No Fluidz Tied Around ya Shouldaz Like a Back Pack Strapped Trapped/
But Rap Wrap Cus U Suck a Dick While Makin Songs Kid...
i Gotta Record Ain No Pedo But Once i Hit Tha Mic rape is On Bitch/

Niiiiiceeeee

not bad, feelin some of the punchlines

U Can Get Shotz If U Sober Cus i Wont Take No Bull Like Doser

^^^ nice wordplay...

good job bro

Yah. One or two bars were pretty cool.

"Bulletz Like Sex Have ya Mind "Fuckin Right" All Desinagratin/
U Can Get Shotz If U Sober Cus i Wont Take No Bull Like Doser "

Others were bull like shit.

Why don't you understand. What you are saying isn't slang? Your just putting it so you can rhyme more.

U Cant Undastand it ... But When im Freestylin Atta Niggah Party N Shit N Da People Feel My Shi.. Tell Me Why Dey Couldnt??? Thanks For Da Feed Anywayz

uh huh

maybe because you don't force multis when you freestyle

if they actually freestyle in fairfield

All I Gotta Say Is?

Let Me hear you freestyle, or do an audio for this verse....

freestyle in fairfield

lol Listen U Hindu Lil 15 Year Old Who Lives in Maine N is Married To His Computer Calm Down a Lil lol cus Now Ur Doin Dat "Slander" Shit Itz All Good Though Cus Some1 Who Says Dey So Smart Cant Get Somethin Right How Does Dat Make U Look 2 Me?? Lmao Give It Up U Hindu i'll Slap Da Red Dot Off Your Forehead

Actually. I never claimed to be smart. I have no idea what you are referencing though? I love how you make all those assumptions. While I base my opinions on facts?

Honestly. I didn't understand half of what you said anyway.

lol i Dont Mean To Be Ignorant But i Dunno If Ur Hindu Or Whuddeva it Doesnt Matta To Me i Dont Care If U Lyke Ur Computer Or if u Hate My Lyrics Dats U All Im Sayin is Jus Get Dat One Fact Righ N Den Holla At me ... im A Grown Man Son i Dont Needa Be Doin Diz Lil Kid Shit. N Ur Da One Assumin Think i Live in Some Suburbin Place Or Somethin if Dats Da Case Den Tell Me Man So i Kno Da Real Me Aiight ...

N Ghost i Dont Have Acid Pro Anymore So i Dunno
i'll See if i Can Get Somethin Recorded At On Of My Niggahz Houses So i'll Prolly Hit Chu Up Wit somethin

n if ur paki how can u use the "n" word so freely?

I Never Understand Hazard, But He Trys To Make Me Look Like I'm The Retarded One....Damn Paki's...lol

lol U Dont Kno Me... u Kno Bitz N Pieces N Even if i Was N i Do I Dont Giva Fuck People Dont Sweat Stupid Shit Lyk Dat.... Diz Sites Gettin Corny As Hell To Me Wit People From Day One On ya Nutz Shit Getz Annoyin....Thankz Fa Da Feeed