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My fury is like a tornado ill take out any bitch in my path
Tossin Bitchs up n spit em out u have yet to feel my Rath/

Mutha fuckaz Test me to see how far ill let them go
Once u cross That Certian line Ma Vicious Acts will blow/

My temper is Short My Hazardous attitude is Sick
My lines already Crossed Instead of beef i write this Spit/

i May come Off as a Nice person But all in All im Not
i Got a cocky Attitude n My fuse is Gettin hot/

Dont ever tell me ur Better Then me Cus Soon ill Prove u wrong
You May have neva Sliped but my Rhymes will cause ya fall/

My being is Invincable these mutha fuckas cant See me
Im packin Heat like a Torch n im Sprayin it freely/

Dis Was Pretty Hott
Structure is On Point ...
Ur Bars Was Good i Liked it lol Ur Endin Was a Killah
N u Had Flow Thru Out Tha Whole Thing

Hot Linez : My being is Invincable these mutha fuckas cant See me
Im packin Heat like a Torch n im Sprayin it freely/

My temper is Short My Hazardous attitude is Sick
My lines already Crossed Instead of beef i write this Spit/

Anywayz Az a Whole Good Shit Hun .. Keep Droppin

Thank u Papi....i like gettin fed back from u Tehe lol uppin for more feed back

yeah word that was a decent drop keep it up for real !

nice drop sis, it flowed well! I like the last lines tha most:

Dont ever tell me ur Better Then me Cus Soon ill Prove u wrong
You May have neva Sliped but my Rhymes will cause ya fall/

My being is Invincable these mutha fuckas cant See me
Im packin Heat like a Torch n im Sprayin it freely/

keep it up!

Why do you capitalize random words every once in a while Ladie.

I find that interesting ;]

Anyway. The drop was simple. Not much to highlight.

"i Got a cocky Attitude n My fuse is Gettin hot/"

Nice though ^