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My name..... Freestyle
Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 10:07 am
by Adept
Da name is adept//
So I got precision//
U cant block me neither intercept//
My path is already showin...I got a vision//
Let da truth be told..im not that good//
Most of da time wen I spit its misunderstood//
Tell me im fake?/You luv to hate?/Im'a fisher and u just shark bait.
wtf am i doing
Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 10:43 am
by Viral
alot better den wat i seen before it seems like a AbAb rhyme scheme...dat works...jst try n make em alot more similiar n such
Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 12:16 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
wat viral said.. till it got past the poetic part than it was regular.. 5 bucks 5 bucks! lol
Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 1:43 pm
by Viral
EkomS wrote:wat viral said.. till it got past the poetic part than it was regular.. 5 bucks 5 bucks! lol
now dats jst wrong!...lol
Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 3:17 pm
by drunken jesus
pretty much whats been said
and your wording is all fucked up, no real rhythm at all
once you get more comfortable with writing and practice more you'll probably get better with it though
Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 2:10 pm
by precise
did i here precision? lol yea just keep practicin man, the ABAB rhymescheme viral was talkin about is often used in poetry, anyways yea, im not gonna hate on it, peace.
Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2006 8:34 am
by drunken jesus
poetry? most good mcs use more complicated rhyme schemes lmao
anybody with an IQ above 20 can write in simplistic aabbcc rhyme schemes