Hip Hop Forum

Im real heavy in dis game/ niggas be like da bars he just spit was real stupid mayne/dats why I put niggaz on I.V tryin and diss me you'll juz be R.I.P/I aint got time fo wack ass niggaz Im quick to pull my trigga nigga run up he'll soon to figure/Once I hop on da mic I cant be stopped da next MC battlin me forced to get dropped/Yeah once its over Ill be through next thing ya know Ill be in da booth but Ill stay wireless like dat blue Tooth/but heres da catch get ready fo da threat/ and if u still in secssion I dont think u got da message

ummmmm. honestly dude, this was like 2/10, you had no flow, no structure, basic rhyme scheme wit basic rhymes. but keep doin yuh thing bro.

a link please, post a link of where u left someone else feedback until the dont expect any feedback

DIDNT LIKE IT 2 MUCH FILLER