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Female In Violet

{telephone rings}


" hey..i been thinkin..and uh..we need to talk.."


"yea i know we do,i have alot on my mind too.."


" well talk to me..lemme know whats up.."


" idk really..you tell me.."


" sighs..aight ma.."


baby its been real bad since we broke up
i mean its krazy im real sad and kinda choked up
and all our precious times they re-play,and swirl like smoke,yup
im sorry that we cudnt work it out but im finally not doped up


u no i cudda sworn thats what u told me the last time
but what happen?u caught sum fast time 4 sum grass or a line
im so mad at u but then again i love you so much
but i had it bo0,we can juz be friends,we'll keep in touch


but mami things have changed im all clean i swear
so i figured id call without soundin mean,aint that fair?
im tryin 4 u,i been cryin 4 u and no i aint lyin ta u
but damn everynight im sighin,thinkin what i do?


it aint like that,i wrote u letters u never tried ta write back?
i mean my heart cudnt fight back,i was so hurt that night,that
i went out with the girls,and said fuck everything ye i did
im sorry,i took off the ring,but my momma watched our kid


this aint about our son,im tryin not 2 shout hun
but like Keith Sweat u got me Twisted,without a doubt hun
and ye i wrote u sum letters but never mailed them
cuz at that point in time,i thought u wudnt care 4 them


but those letters cudda changed whats happenin now
i mean ye ur rappin now,but look whos laughin now
ye thats it nobody is,cuz we both gotta broken heart
cuz u chose ta go and toke up from the start


baby i told u that im quittin,thats why im spittin
puttin my feelins on paper and songs i've written
i know u thinkin 'ye sure thats what u doin'
but u gotta believe me,this is what im persuin

what about us?what about our child
u doin stupid shit,goin around actin wild
i mean that aint u,at least i hope it still aint
cuz i remember that one time we went 2 paint

i hate 2 cut u off but i need 2 no suttin
were u really down 4 me?or was u just frontin
cuz i got the impression that u dont love me
and u'd go and place any man above me


u got it all wrong babyboi i want u in my life
i want u ta get on ur knees and make me ur wife
i wanna take on the world just u and me
like bonnie n clyde,and bobby and whitney

well if thats the case girl lemme come ova
and show u what i mean by bein ur soulja
we cud start all new,start from scratch
ride 2getha 4ever,were a perfect match

i like the sound of that it sounds real nice
come ova around 3 dont make me call twice
ill leave the door unlocked so u can walk in
then maybe,we can start fresh again and keep talkin


little story tellin piece i made up..whatchall think?and heres my link

http://illestlyrics.com/board/spoof-ft- ... t3684.html

ahh Vince you ass!! LOL im gonna KILL you - I like how it turned out...you did a good job the shit was hawt. Are we still working on that piece or is it trash now since you just posted this?

thanks sammy..n naw we still workin on urs ^_^ dont worry

uppinnnnnn

this is real nice both of u... mad props... n i wanna see a kulprit and blitz collab

thanks man...uppin 4 anymore

Wow ..
Even Though it Was Simple as Shit ..
i Still Loved This Piece ..
U Seriously are Growin` as an artist ..
Tha Flow Was Perfect ..
Everythin` Was Basic But Yet On Point ..
i Loved it yo` ..
it Was One Of ya Best ..
No Doubt ..

thank u thank u..apperciate the feed from u all much luv..-1-

yeah this shit was mos def on point son, and i agree wit fiasco the flow was great and so was the subject and its mos def one of your better drops, keep it up and keep growin....

thanks man