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topic is like i wanna be wit dis gurl and she wanna be wit me so its like a 'call out 2 her' i guess lol enjoy *yes i no the structure iz blah but it goes 2 the beat i picked out nicely*

i wanna sail across the blue,dont care if it cost a few
as long as i know,i get'ta be lost with u
goin on'a cruise-n-trips,ye the news iz quick
this dude iz sick,of lookin 4 a gurl who aint rude n shit
but u put up,a fight so strong that helped me right my wrongs
and despite how long,it took us 2 become tight this song
iz justa another way that helps us 2 move on
i dont wanna lace u with ice cuz ur taste is so nice
the type i wanna dress up,and make my wife

feed?

nice dude, a lil basic but for what it for its tight, had some good meanin and shit behind, could use a lil more emotion and originality but that'll come out in the audio, overall for as short as it was it was tight. i liked it man, big ups

thank u..uppin

it was straight

still in progress right? like symbolikul said, fairly basic but thats what ya need for an audio piece to make sense so its cool

good job bro keep at it

ye its in progress homie..but uppinnn

PrecisE wrote:it was straight

still in progress right? like symbolikul said, fairly basic but thats what ya need for an audio piece to make sense so its cool

good job bro keep at it

uh. I don't agree. Maybe in the mainstream. You can make it as complex as you want. If its good people will listen to it over n over again until they get every part of it.

complexity wrote:

PrecisE wrote:it was straight

still in progress right? like symbolikul said, fairly basic but thats what ya need for an audio piece to make sense so its cool

good job bro keep at it

uh. I don't agree. Maybe in the mainstream. You can make it as complex as you want. If its good people will listen to it over n over again until they get every part of it.

plex i agree with u,i mean i see there point but look @ fabolous,cassidy,big pun they all made it mainstream and were pretty complex..but it was justa expierment u no..but thanks 4 the feed guys

on the contrary, topical pieces generally arent complex as hell, so up yours, hahahaha

lmaoo..but see thats where originalitys gotta come in u no..so 'up urs 2' lol

Sorry being rude as shit, n not leaving feedback. I liked the concept homie. Good luck with this

hahaha word

lol thanks *flips precise off*

thanks homie

precise the point of a "topical" piece is creativity and complexity, if it didn't have a topic why would it be complex...

its a long story now, i was talking rhymescheme didnt need to be complex for a topical audio track, lol i was TRYIN to give the guy a compliment but i dont think he liked it lol