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he said 6 bars and by 48hrs in my pms..soo thas the ish -1-

im checkin in

ight me 2

Im a monster metephorically//ul be yesterdays news once i murder you orally//ur raps are timid and orderly//mine are devastating upon-satan//il start to take u serious wenever ur done-hating//battling me ur 1-brave-dawg//but im still gona put u down like a un-beheaved dog//re-name u bin laden and send u back 2 ur cave-dawg//cause i get trys like john madden and drop sweeter hooks dan nate dog.

im never over-destruction//ur flow softer dan sofa cushions//my intelligence u aint touching//u was raped -of-an-education//u know my flow stay crazy like an-escaped mental patient//already people reading can sense-ur-desperation/as u sit tense-desperately-waiting-//to be mass-acured//u 2 busy hating- to be aware of the shit thats-occured//see my goals to fill my bank-and-get-wiser//i put fools like u down like i carried a tran-quil-ser//blood have u sporting red like u endorsed tizer//i break rappers like u as if u were hollow-eggs//i got heat u only experience when u on ur holi-days//ur bitchy ways are obs-cene-and-neva clear//they call da kid mr-halloween cause im a
walking-bonfire all throught-the-year.

UH which verse u keepin man?

i gotta passion 4 smashin lil faggots like u who actin
like they rappin n clappin,u ticklin me son im laughin
u asked 4 this so im'a smash u wit fast accurateness
i mean i seen sum bad ppl,but whos wacker-then-this?
im keyin quick but u bein 'it' haha naw man u seein shit
ill attack ya n slap ya leavin u white like Semen-bitch
but its the same ol shit u gonna 'erase' my fame wit the 5th
and try n claim u click n spray flames wit it
enough with the trash talkin u juz trash walkin
all those threats'll leave u fast in'a coffin
take Dmx's Advice cuz the lord needa give u a sign
only way ull ever be a 'star' iz if i give u mine

pretty much explainable the last line means if i give him rep,so he gets 'stars' ya no...uppin 4 votes

lol...umm? wtf...

i cut my first verse off 2 quick so i did the other as a follow up to the first

oo..ight well whatever juz uppin 4 votes -1-

whens the winner decided

after u or i reach 3votes TKO or reach 5 votes...uppin

aight.

Vocab= AJ
Multies= TRAM
Wordplay=TRAM
Entertainment=Neither
Punches=TRAM

VOTE=TRAM

NEITHER ONE OF U CAME HARD , REALLY A DISAPOINTMENT TO READ

ye i know but thanks..1-0 uppin