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wud up yall -

lateast track, got another new mic & tryin to get comfortable mixin w/ it still. hit me up w/ ya 2 pennies

http://www.soundclick.com/fluency2k4

at one time, we were glued together/
soon shared a life, that would fight through the weather/
never had a doubt about the future/
u first, kissed me, gripping hard on our 2 shirts/
2 thirds of this blue earth confused her/
& my relationship/
for tryin to play a bitch/
those weren't my intentions/
turned lies to wisdom/
turn high the system/
her & i would listen/
to it at night, just usin our life to fuel us/
threw back the loops that the big guy always drew us/
assumin we'd last forever, & pass together/
passed letters, now they're goin pass the the shredder/

the lyrics are good, the concept is good, and the flow as usual is good, this could could be a gem when its finished. Peace

sup fluency long time no battle lol, i'll check that audio out later or somethin

wow, nice track, 9/10, god any pointers for a newbie?