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okay here i go!

yo you like another fish-in-da-sea wishin-to-be//
standin there like a dumbass diss-in for-free list-en too me!//
you must be miss-in da C (in mc)//
cuz every bar i spit dope its skull split-in ya sneaks//

all ya raps are a-mess//
talkin bout blastin ya-techs//
like a gay hotel ima put dis faggot-to-rest//
i laugh at ya-threats//
ya call outs is like askin-for-death you da whackest-in-text//
tryin to get thru me cuz you gaspin-for-breath//
i got em shot wit a cap-in-his-chest//
dat mean its over when its a gat-to-ya-neck//

and you know da chrome-is-lethal//
i spit injections like im holdin-needles//
nigga im winnin dis one its no more sequals//
im gettin sick of niggas thinkin ima joke go-home-people//

is dis good structure??
okay next!!

wow thats way more than 4-6 bars

samurai i'ma dice u into little bits
if i disected u in everyway u still won't add to shit

this dudes fuckin brave to step to up to me
i'm suprised that this youngin knows his abc's alphabetically

ghost didn't like u so cause ur lower than a "jilt"
so i guess thats why he kicked u outta Full TILT

damn i got called out by a rookie, i knew he would
dude if i squated to ur level, u still wouldn't be good

so rn't u suprised that ur the last pick to join any other crew?
their all playin rock papers siccors cause ur last pick they don't want u

so listen to me kid n stick to the "rooks"
cause i just "knighted" ur king, check "mate" ur shook

see that's proof to why i took ur spot haha

Multies=JK
Punches=LAWGIX
Entertainment=LAWGIX
Personals=LAWGIX.. GOOD BATTLE VOTE= LAWGIX

good uppin!
thanx for votin

Welp Lawgix Killed it IMO. JK Like... Just Started Rappin About Himself, His Multis Were On Point Yah. But Lawgix Took Like Every Other Cat.
Vote = Lawgix

For some odd reason i have strong doubts that was even skull kids verse like its better then your normal drops

I'll be damn in my opinion I think Samurai took this one. Law you had like one personal in the beginning and it wasn't a heavy landing one. Count this if you want. Good job to both MCs.

okay 2-1 lawgix
was that a vote sequence?

wow i wasn't even tryin... n i get 1 vote against me lol

okay great!

nenos vote was um bs btw...

neno's vote does not count until explained....

2-0

and my vote goes to Lawgix

he had better punches, made more sence, structure was legible, flow was more consistant, personals was a tie....

so 3-0 huh?
pitifull!

i'm givin Neno 24 hours to explain his vote if he doesn't explain in 24 hours the battle is a ko

fuck dat you win forget da fuckin vote this was one of my best verses still lost fuck it!