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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:57 pm
by *.HarleQuin.*
mac!!, u cant kill her!! NOOO
i like this even tho it
SCARED me!! hehe
flowed quite nicely..= )
Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:58 pm
by MesaR
lol yeah man it was pritty funny.
Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:56 pm
by complexity
cooool
Word. I've actually done this topic before.
It could be argued that you did it a little better.
I thought this was pretty creative. The rhyme scheme
was a little off.
Not much for a conclusion. The overall direction wasn't that
great.
I still felt the concept & the flow though. Despite the rhyme scheme
losing itself sometimes.
Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:58 pm
by ~*Blitz*~
wow, alot of anger! lol....nice drop that shit was insane but good, it went together nicely and didnt fall off once...good shit!
Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 5:01 pm
by complexity
Or maybe you being a good enough author to get the point across. I was lost at the end?