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Hmmz, So i Gotta Regret Sumptin` `cus i`m Doin` Me ??..
Lol, Who U Be ??.. Some Mad Chick Talkin` about Shootin` Me ??..
Pissed Off `cus i Let U Free ??..
Okay ma`, First Off U Don`t Know Wha`s Goin` On Wit Me For Me to Let U Go ..
Now See Me Regrettin` Tha Fact i Did, is Gettin` Kinda Questionable ..
Why U Gettin` So Wreckless Though ??.. Like U`ll Really Let Clips Go ..
No .. Don`t Start, Why Even Get On Tha Flows, See ..
Now i Gotta Say .. That .. Wat U Say, Doesn`t Matter Like U Told Me ..
i ain`t Gon` Let Mah Pride This Time, `cus U Seemin` to Not Care ..
& i Could Be Like U, & Juss act Like Mah Feelin`s is Not There ..
U Makin` Seem as if i Can`t Breathe Without U, Baby U Not air ..
it Doesn`t Matter, So i`m Not Gon` Tell U Why We Parted Ways ..
i Gotta Do Wat Mah Future Focus` On, Not Juss Wat Mah Heart Would Say ..
So Go ahead, Diss Me all U Want, it`s Really Not Fadin` Me ..
U Say U Don`t Wanna Be Koo`, But Yet Pm Me, Chick Don`t Play Wit Me ..
i Don`t Wanna Say That i Don`t Give a Fuck about U, Then i Won`t Be actin` Fa`Rell ..
Why U Blastin` at Rell ??.. it ain`t Like i Wanted to Put That Thug Turtle Back in Tha Shell ..
Smh, i Don`t even Know Wat to Think, i Feel Bad That i Left U, But Feel Good `cus i`m Livin` Right ..
Livin` Like .. U Wanted Me to Do, Get a Career & Stop Livin` Lies ..
i`m Sorry That i Can`t explain Why i`m Gone, it`s Sumptin` Personal ..
i Guess We Both On .. Hi & Bye .. Like i`m Juss another Person to U ..[/align]

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post28554.html#28554

No .. Don`t Start, Why Even Get On Tha Flows, See ..
Now i Gotta Say .. That .. Wat U Say, Doesn`t Matter Like U Told Me..

fav part^^ but nice rell..nice 2 see u @ least tryna show up a lil u no...hope u doin ight..stay droppin..nice emotion...

Yeah ..
Good Lookin` Out Vince ..
i Got a Lil Free Time ..
So i Juss Dropped Sumptin` Real Quick ..

nice verse....man...now we got both sides of the story!...poppin off clips?...oh shit!!...lol....stay up....do wat u do man...good to see u around...

nice to have u back br0 felt the emotion in this man... great job... keep droppin that hot shit man!!!! peace br0

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felt the emotion as well, but other then that it was a bit too basic for me.. felt like i've heard the same story over and over again.. u feelin me? i know u got skills rell, and u've proved that u're creative.. try and use that in all ya verses.. know it's hard to do that in this type of verse, but u're one of the few who actually are able to do it..

but the lil ending there was tight.. loved that...

overall i'd give it a 8/10, cause of the emotion.. keep it up rell!

This was pretty cool. I don't know if all this dirty laundry should be addressed through text on the board. Or maybe thats the only way. Its good stuff to read though. Pretty interesting. Nicely worded.

There ain`t No Dirty Laundry ..
Wdf ..
Either Way ..
GoodLookin` Out Y`all ..
Uppin` ..