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Listen ma`,

Uh, There`s Sumptin` That i Have to Say, U Wack & Gay, This is Bastard Play ..//..
Mah Dick in ya Mouth, Swallow?? ya "Will Son / Wilson" Like "Tom Hank`s Ball On Castaway" ..//..
Make U Pass away, Without Even Havin` to Reload Clips, Blitz Finna Lose & She Knows it ..//..
Nobody Else Thinks ya "Lines are Sharp" But U, Tha`s Why U "Cut yaSelf" Like an "Emo Chick" ..//..
askin` Me For Tips & advice, i`ll Smack This Bitch Wit a Knife, & Watch Her Fame Stop Quick ..//..
U ain`t Worth Flames, Stop Chick, i`ll Give This "Blonde Def / Death" Like Her "Survey Topic" ..//..
She ain`t Stoppin` Me On This Site, Throw "Alicia at Her" Juss to Show U i`m "Droppin` Keys On This Dike" ..//..
On Tha Radio Mah Joints-Uh-Blast, Crowd See U, They`ll Point-&-Laugh, ya Wins ? U "Own Small amounts" `cus U "Property Of Precise" ..//..
There`s No Need For actin` Hard Bitch, "Catch Tha Hard Clips" Take Out Mah anger On Her, Don`t Call it "Madden On Blitz" ..//..
it`ll "Hurt More" Like i`m "Stabbin` Scar Splits", This Bitch a Dike, She already Got "Fingers By Her Mouth" Look at Her "Avator Pic" ..//..
U Ugly, i Don`t Want That Bug Near Me, U Suck, So "Throwin` Slugs in Mah Ear" Only Time i Hear Heat ..//..
Flat Chested, So ain`t No Way ya Jugs`ll Steal V`s (Votes), Fat ass, U`ll Probably "Eat Tha Chip Off ya Shoulder" Since U Favor Tha Gurl From Tha "Grudge Series" ..//..

Don`t Fix ya Lips to Call Me Wack Neither .. Haha ..

hey lol, I know your a busy dood and shit but I respect your opinion and Im tryin to get a diffrent view from elite people ony what I need to work on as far as my writings...sooooooooo if you get some time can u tell me what you think i need to work on? PLEASE! <3

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ur last bar is wrong bro...lol shes got tig-o-bitties!!...lol

Raped? heh...
Its time to put a halt to your winning spree
Ima lyricaly murder you - It only takes *one* Sam, not all three

~ Here we go

My presence is felt, Look bitch you're pathetic as hell
You get your lines like you got your name, Stealing it from everyone else/ (Lupe Fiasco, Hell Rell etc.)*
But you got this cocky persona that you delevoped from all ya favorite rappers
Yet you're still a pussy mother fucker, Fight me and you'll get ya ass kicked backwards/
I've got you outta your element now, This is a battle, I dont see no half pipe
You're ugly as fuck and the only time Whitney got pussy was in a past life/**
Quick to roll you up and smoke you, Flick and watch the little blunt fall
Ya style is so impotent, So its not that you dont come hard, Its that you just dont cum at all/
You're balemic ass is puking the meals your mommy spends all her time on
So on the real whats skinnier? Rell... or the rails that he grinds on?/
You're just pissed cuz I beat your ex and your still tryna support her
But when I beat you it goes to prove I woulda won even when you wrote her lines for her/

*He also uses the name Hellrell in spinchat
**element is a skateboarding clothing company

Idk great battle..
Like Rells personals..
Liked Blitz whole flow..
Blitz structure was better..

Imma go with Blitz..
need more details holla at me..

both verses were definatley dope as hell...but im goin wit blitz on this one....rell..u had some good lines...i didnt feel ur punches nearly as much as i felt blitz....its like she came straight up n gave it to u wit no other fancy shit....n thats not somethin that comes by everyday....u had some good lines..but some seemed forced to me......good battle to both of u


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^^ .. Lmfao ..
This is Fuckin` Funny as Hell ..
Please Tell Me How Tha Fuck Mah Punches Was Forced ..
Until U Tell Me Then i`ll Count Tha Vote ..
& Neither One Of U Niggas Voted in Tha Cats ..
`cus i Bet U Tha Only Cat She Probably Got Was Structure ..
So Vote in Cats ..

id Be Lyin if i Said This Wasnt Close as Hell...
My presence is felt, Look bitch you're pathetic as hell
You get your lines like you got your name, Stealing it from everyone else/ <--Deffo a Kick in The Nuts Lol
You're just pissed cuz I beat your ex and your still tryna support her
But when I beat you it goes to prove I woulda won even when you wrote her lines for her/ <-- And an Encore

On Tha Radio Mah Joints-Uh-Blast, Crowd See U, They`ll Point-&-Laugh, ya Wins ? U "Own Small amounts" `cus U "Property Of Precise" ..//.. <--Cunt Punt

it`ll "Hurt More" Like i`m "Stabbin` Scar Splits", This Bitch a Dike, She already Got "Fingers By Her Mouth" Look at Her "Avator Pic" ..//.. <--Cunt Punt

U`ll Probably "Eat Tha Chip Off ya Shoulder" Since U Favor Tha Gurl From Tha "Grudge Series" ..//..
^^Another Encore

And The Cats

Punches - Tied
Personals - Blitz
Multis - Rell
Structure - Blitz
Creativity - Rell
Flow - Rell
Entertainment - Blitz
Mettas/Similies - Rell

Close as Fuck But My Vote's For Rell

ill tell ya how they wer forced ^^^

basically, they were punch concepts that werent exactly worked properly like this:

ya "Will Son / Wilson" Like "Tom Hank`s Ball On Castaway" ..// <-- decent idea for wordplay, but really you were only callin her a volleyball

This Bitch a Dike, She already Got "Fingers By Her Mouth" Look at Her "Avator Pic" ..// <-- straight women are known to put there fingers by there mouth as well

etc..

overall, blitze takes this, rell had nice punch concepts n wordplay concepts but just werent used properly, rell definately took the multi category, but let it slip in others

definately a good battle by both

but overall yea, vote = blitze

Wow Rell Can't Stand Losin, Anyways i Also Thought Blitz Came Harder With The Punches, Both Versus Were Good But I'm Going To Go With Blitz.

Vote - Blitz

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-.RELL.FiaSCO.- wrote:^^ .. Lmfao ..
This is Fuckin` Funny as Hell ..
Please Tell Me How Tha Fuck Mah Punches Was Forced ..
Until U Tell Me Then i`ll Count Tha Vote ..
& Neither One Of U Niggas Voted in Tha Cats ..
`cus i Bet U Tha Only Cat She Probably Got Was Structure ..
So Vote in Cats ..

ur a fuckin baby....fuck it...dont count my vote...ur shit was foooorced....puttin in words for fun cuz they sound cool...n happen to go together...thats y i aint vote for ya....precise explained it well enough...if u dont accept my vote its pretty obvious ur too scared to lose....


theres no need for categories....ya either like someones verse or not..reasons y...done....if u need categories i hate to say it..but its kinda sad....

Wdf .. i Seriously Don`t Understand How That Shit Was Forced ...
Lmfao it`s Juss Funny as Hell yo` ..
Very Funny ..

But Wateva ..

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-.RELL.FiaSCO.- wrote:Wdf .. i Seriously Don`t Understand How That Shit Was Forced ...
Lmfao it`s Juss Funny as Hell yo` ..
Very Funny ..

But Wateva ..

5-1 ..

it was man...u might not see it as the writer...but we do


its 4-1 btw

UPPIN!

id have 2 say blitz got this rell..no hate but she packin here..she got more katz in my opinion then u,in my view but overall im votin 4 blitz cuz she had the solid punches,the amusment n all..so my vote - blitz no hate -1-