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you see, i've been questioned on talent, damaged self esteem with words
who would ever think these-nerds, de-served, the time to witness what hes earned
but as the trees burn, lights die, night flies, those same wise guys
showed me things that i couldnt see with my eyes, but now attempting to blind mine
but ill shine fine, with the help of these words, and that old skeezer
complexity isnt what i deserve, multi-king, please sir
i never need words, to show me how bad these dreams hurt
i went from chillin where the streets curve, and watching feins be served
you see complexity isnt the word, rapping isnt the verb
attacking with action, leaving brain cells bashing and crashing
im happily clapping, and still dramatically laughing..happy?
i've only conquered dreams, and chill with the most sponsered team
DP, the people that haunt chur dreams,leaving your love mates on their knees
how wrong was he, wondering how i come up with a sqaud so mean
i stand here with an honest conscience, nothing i write is nonsense
i dont make claims to be IL favorite, like that guy who battle kawnvikt
i only battle those who are worth the time, unless im proving their absurd with rhymes
never served a dime,u'd swear they heard my rhymes the way i blow their minds
you still think in these rhymes i fuck around?its nothing clown
you could super glue domino on top,i wont even use a punch, ill flick that fucker down

Liked it..had some great lines..

lmao. seriously pretty impressive. without a doubt the most complicated rhyme scheme you have used to date.

i've only conquered dreams, and chill with the most sponsered team
DP, the people that haunt chur dreams,leaving your love mates on their knees
how wrong was he, wondering how i come up with a sqaud so mean

them were the sickest lines in my opinion plus representing

I liked the story. Even though it feels like you have went over it like 2000 times! Lmao

thanks guys, i really appreciate it...still uppin for more feed and ill return the favor if u drop a link...

guess i should return the favour micz..
i really liked this piece, especially the way u're wording yourself.. i missed the flow a few times, cause of the length of bars, try and do somthin bout that.. i felt u sorta dropped a bit in quality at the end, but the last line kinda saved ya ass.. keep droppin!

you still think in these rhymes i fuck around?its nothing clown
you could super glue domino on top,i wont even use a punch, ill flick that fucker down

hahaha.. nice line..

you still think in these rhymes i fuck around?its nothing clown
you could super glue domino on top,i wont even use a punch, ill flick that fucker down

Felling that line man...it was goood micz..
Still Uppin for some more feed..!!

Lmfao ..
Good Shit Micz ..
it Flowed Hella Nice Fam ..
Tha Closer Was ill ..
Nice Lil Jab ..
& a Nice Way to Rep DP ..
Multies Was ill as Hell too ..
Haha ..

first line was gay n i almost stopped readin but as much as i hate 2 say nice drop i liked it

hm, not bad except multi king has already been taken by me, maybe next time though

looks like your drunken jesus fan club membership payed off

probably the best piece i've seen from you, the wordplay, similies, multis, flow etc was all there

well, thanks for the feedback, i had to prove that i still had something in me, i guess thats all the feed im gettin so..PEACE

prolly the best thing ive read from you

word of the day: elevation

the closer was ill man, the whole piece flowed very well. its was mos def dope as hell man, not many quotables, but everything fit together very well

8.3/10

Deffo The Most Thorough Piece ive Read From u Lol. a Lot Of Quotables And u Taken ur Style To The Next Level id Say. Used a Lot More Consistent Multis And inner Rhymes.

you see complexity isnt the word, rapping isnt the verb
attacking with action, leaving brain cells bashing and crashing
im happily clapping, and still dramatically laughing..happy?
^Example, Similar To a Rakim Style Lol. So id Say Keep That Up. Some Nice Punches And Flowed a Lot More Easier That Other Shit i Seen From u. And a Lot More Of ur Lines Had Meaning. Other Shit i Seen From u Aint Got Filler Lines id Say But u Like.. Maybe Worded it Wrong And Missed The Point So Good To See ur Doing That a Lot Less Lol. And Oh Nice Closer, Fuckin Tosser Lol.