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freestyle flow
Posted: Mon Jan 30, 2006 5:26 pm
by overkill
Comin' out the 'birth canal as words' you wouldn't be born-as-lyrical//
This 'Man' must hire a 'Lyricist' to perform-his-'miracles'//
'Spur' of the moment rhyming, I'll put ya lines-in-'sports'//
'Abreviate ya words,' the skill in ya rhymes-is-'short'//
'Ring around your rhymes,' I'll 'plunger'-with-force//
Never 'penetratin'' rhymes, you'll always just have a 'Hunger-for-Force'//
'Whip' you with lyrics, keep it wild-and-gold//
Even ya name implies that ya style-is-'cold'//
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 6:51 am
by complexity
this was dope, nice wordplay man. 8/10
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 9:50 am
by Ambiguous Realm
pretty decent piece.. better than the shyt u did for the battle u had with micz...7/10
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:06 am
by overkill
EkomS wrote:pretty decent piece.. better than the shyt u did for the battle u had with micz...7/10
As I told complex, it only took 6 hrs.
That's wacked, it took my wife less time to have my first son.
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:09 am
by Ambiguous Realm
6 hrs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!holy shit.. ur joking lmao
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:12 am
by overkill
EkomS wrote:6 hrs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!holy shit.. ur joking lmao
In my house there is 6 total. My wife and kids plus my inlaws live with us. Its rush hour 24-7.
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:16 am
by Ambiguous Realm
so then y did it take so long?
really lol.. it only takes a couple of mins to drop
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:51 am
by overkill
Technically......probably not, mybe 3 hrs.....lol
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:01 am
by drunken jesus
foreal
anything you see me post on here takes me less than a whole beat to play thru twice, and thats like 8 minutes max
anyway this was alright multis were strait, now you just need to work on similies, metaphors, & rhyme scheme
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:27 am
by overkill
all killah wrote:foreal
now you just need to work on similies, metaphors, & rhyme scheme
Man, now ur tell'in me to go back to school, they did'nt have half that shit in tha stone age.
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:31 am
by drunken jesus
go tell that to kool g rap, rakim, & big daddy kane
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:39 am
by complexity
hahah ^
Posted: Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:47 am
by overkill
all killah wrote:go tell that to kool g rap, rakim, & big daddy kane
LMAO......