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Aight I Know You DOn't Wanna Hear Me bitch About My Problems, But I Wrote A Song In Like a Half Hour About My Girl, Strictly Singing Though, No Rap lol, But Yeah Just Let ME Know What You Guys Think. And I'm No Singer So Be Kind haha

lyrics were cool... sounded more like a rock song tho honestly... could've added a guitar... been awesome but its a good tune man... deep... somethin that rap can't touch... good job

Word Thanks Man, Apreciate that!

Nice shit dude I really felt this song probably the best ive ever heard from you.... Fuckin almost perfect ima give it a 9.8

I'm not gonna lie. This track had a muffle just like the other song did earlier. (Diverse knows what I'm talkin about) But he's gotta great voice & slight accent to pull off songs that have hooks and emotion like that. If it were cleaned up...it be a great track. I know it's not rap...but it's from the heart. so I give it a 10. And believe me...if I give it a 10...then it's gotta be dope. Now that I know Diverse can do shit like that...I have a few concepts for him to work on. All he needs to do is fix that static-like sound on his instrumentals and we're in business.

Now see...this is what I'm talkin about. Whoever at any time might of claimed that this kid ain't got talent...I hope ur chokin on ur mashed potatoes as you read this...cuz the boy has good potential. So hopefully he sticks with it and keeps his head & mind in the right state no matter what life throws at him.

Diverse...women will always come and go...but muzik will be here forever. I know that sounds a little corny...sounds like a very lonely thing to say too...but when you get to the point that I have in all this...you'll learn the truth behind it all. I've had to pick my muzik over love before, but sometimes that's how the cards have to be played. Never gamble with your dreams...you'll hate yourself later for it.

Think about it.

statics most likely on the vocal track, unless the instrumental was a live recording

track was cool, i was expecting a guitar or drum break to kick in, some of the singing was offkey and their were a few iffy pauses but overall it was a real solid track, best track i've heard on here in a minute

Word, Thanks Alot Youguys, I Rushed It A Bit, Cuz that Took About half Hour 2 an Hour To Make, So Today, i'm going ToWork On It A Bit More, Make A Bit Better.

okiie i'm such an idiot, i fixed that fucked up thing at the beggining, but the song needs to be redone now, god damn i'm a moron lol

okiie i fixed it up a bit, not sure if it sounds any better, take a look if you want,, thanks for all the feed 2 you guys

pretty incredible man

this touched my heart to be honest. i agree with kurse it wasnt rap but it came from the heart so its a 10 for sure. and also agree with DJ lol i was waiting for some drums to rock in, but this is awesome. i love the way some men can actually pour out there heart, and not feel the need to act hard and like he doesnt care about some girl. and this track is real, which gives it more meaning. and women do come and go, but the right one doesnt, she comes once, so i suggest u try and get her back b4 its too late. lol it hink all u boys should take some lessons from him! and actually care about a girl instead of looking at her as a piece of ass lol thats jus my two cents.
keep this up man.

5 teefs so far for this to be a Illest Radio regular... lets keep the votes coming in Illest Audio!!!!!!

Haha You Guys Are Awesome lol

This song was very emotional and the lyrics stand out, You have an incredible voice that is very unique and you really know how to bring out what you're truly feeling in your songs. You did a good job with this song. Its nice to see someone singing about something they are actually feeling and something thats real.

You have talent and hopefully you stick with singing.

And Sammity Sam I agree with you, all men need a lesson from Tyler on how to treat a woman!

Awesome work <3

uh huh thats right! haha <3