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Untitled Just A Bar From Track I'm Doin...

Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 6:08 pm
by Lawgix
just respect only my self respect
as i neglect the signs of war victims so i suggest

back down while u can just accept
ur own fuckin defeat n just lay it at rest

the beef between u and me is easily seen
as enemies were mortal, so we wanna see each other bleed

but we see no signs of escaping, as we are degrading
each others career as we stand forward defacing

one another we use to be brothers
closer than blood n thicker than friendships we had with others

we didn't bother with fuckers that wanted to kill us with words
we just dispursed out a verse an unleashed hell on these faggets turf

n just because we beef with these three doesn't mean
that i'm runnin back to em to tumble over my own feet

enemies are enemies thats how i see them being
us no sign of friendship only thing we have to be is be forgiving

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post31197.html#31197

Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:46 am
by complexity
You know the rhymes in general were pretty simple homie.

It had a nice little flow to it. I think you fit in the niche you were attempting to get in but just came off a little lackadaisical

Posted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:44 am
by Lawgix
yeah it was just somethin i wrote really quick... thanx for the input tho...