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[Hook 2x]
This rhyme came to -Mind- wen i had trouble on the -Grind- //
But my -Kind- reeli -Shine- thro a thought out -Rhyme- //
And they say " Damn Man, iITS ABOUT-TIME- " //

I mite lik to kno why every day isa -Hell- //
Neva knoin if im guna fail, neva knoin if im guna go to -Jail- //
Neva knoin if ima get -Shot- or -Not- but my skill are so -Hot- //
They could -Grill Ya- even -Kill Ya-, -Conseal Ya- //
Even -Steal Ya-, soul but -Still-Ya- //
KNOW that i could be ya biggest F-oe- cuz i bring the rigerous -Flow- //
An still ya -Kno- u my -Hoe- get on ya knees an -Blow- //
Oh hoe! watcha -Think About That?- //
Say sumthin stupid? NAW dont even -Think About That- //
Cuz my lyrical flows ell take u to the -mat- n keep u on ya -Back- //
Thats wat u get for talkin that -Smack- u aint good that why u always skipin on -Track- //
An man thats a -Fact- wen u hear my lines get scared to -React- //
Ima jus leave it at -That-, dont care if u believen my -Fact- //
Fuckin wit me will leave not one part of ya body -Intact- //

[Hook 2x]
This rhyme came to -Mind- wen i had trouble on the -Grind- //
But my -Kind- reeli -Shine- thro a thought out -Rhyme- //
And they say " Damn Man, iITS ABOUT-TIME- " //

U hear that? but cant say nutin cuz its chokin ya -Throat- //
Bitch ass cant even take in a -Joke-, lame stayin at -Broke- //
Bitch -Sit-, im -Sick-, my rhymes are so -Legit- //
They should be the papers so u can read em wile ur takin a -Shit- // (think about it)
Wen i spit lyricaly people catch the -Fraze-, but wen i diss sum hit em hard an make em all -Dazzed- //
Kill em rite n the house they were -Raised-, this is my land u -Grazed- //
I dont care wat u do, it wont make me -Fazed-, ur styles weaker then them fuckin -Gays- //
Ya dady cryin for a -Raise-, hard time liven handlen -days- //
An unlik u i got dismantelin brain -Waves-, ya momas mouth i -Glaze- //
Soo ya -Testin Me?-.. well u beta biga deep breath if u -Guessin Wit Me- //
Cuz ya... dealin wit death if u -Messin Wit Me- //

[Hook 2x]
This rhyme came to -Mind- wen i had trouble on the -Grind- //
But my -Kind- reeli -Shine- thro a thought out -Rhyme- //
And they say " Damn Man, iITS ABOUT-TIME- " //

Watcha think i wont pulla trigga? ill jus blow -A Kiss- //
Im tight lik -Ludacris-, an im fuckin -New At This- //
Why u at this? u aint -Koo At This-, ur dead body wont be -Soon To Miss- //
So Fly, duno Why, its all i kno -How Ta Do-, -Jusa Clue- //
Have -None For U-, i wouldnt wast a -One On U //
Let alone a -Nine-, all i get is -MinD-, so fuck it, im on the -Grind- //
Dont need to be out gettin -Mine-, no matter how gay it is u cant bust my -Line- //
I run this -Spot- this shits -Hot-, everyone knos u -Not- //
Im jus -Cold & Bold-, somthin u -Cannot Hold-, dont fuck wit me, i neva -Fold- //
Neva -Run-, gota -Gun-, dont need to -Run-, if i do, its jus for -Fun- //
Maybe from the -Cops-, i -Spot- the -Tops-, blow up -Drops- //
People close up -Shops-, clean up the blood -Spots- wit dirty -Mops- //
L-Blocc run this hood, neva -Hide-, we'd rather -Slide- //
I rep the North-Side-, West-Side-, comon yall lets -Ride- //

[Hook 2x]
This rhyme came to -Mind- wen i had trouble on the -Grind- //
But my -Kind- reeli -Shine- thro a thought out -Rhyme- //
And they say " Damn Man, iITS ABOUT-TIME- " //


Jusa couple simple verses, wita lil hook... pretty good flow jus the kinda shit u can easly see ya self listen to... some prewrittin shit... hope yall liked it..... feed plz

Well im no pro but you got flow, its straight, 7/10

if ur a chick u got potential.. had some nice flow here and there... more multis and complexity should elevate..keep it up tho..whoever u r

its alright, ekoms pretty much broke it down

and i hate the way you write, looks like your tryna to make a pinto look like a cadillac, making shit look nicer than it is